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oh it's absolutely entertaining for me especially given the fact that i am a Norse pagan I mean my patron god is Odin himself since he is the god of war, magic, and knowledge back when he got thrashed in helhiem I was laughing and you write them with personalities that fit them I truly enjoy it so keep it up man . I'm enjoying your story far more than any others I've read when i wake up in the morning I make sure I read the chapter first thing also if you ever need a break take one man you can't keep this awesome story going if your health takes a turn
I've said it before and I'll say it again it's a wonderful story. In my opinion, all of the characters are more fleshed out than a good portion of stories out there, world building feels good and seamless . The only thing I really have to say is keep going exactly how you are it's impossible to please each and every reader at the end of the day all that honestly should matter is whether you enjoy what you wrote it's your story, you write exactly what YOU want
also adding on to that he has so much to learn even if he had every single memory of his first life it's not like he got to truly socialize with anyone but Yesh and Asherah and of course "Them" (even if it was extremely a one-sided talk lol) so it's not like going the route where he recovers every memory of every life he has ever lived will make him all knowing just because a character has no equal in actual power only makes him OP in that specific aspect if we go by that then most of his wife's and children are OP as well . with his children (excluding straga) having all their memories especially Gabriella at one point stating that that the beings stronger than her could be counted on one hand ? (memories not the greatest) I guess what I'm trying to say is they are so well fleshed out that them being op in any aspects . just adds to who they are and who they are as characters happens to be extremely interesting like wanna see how quick and op Abaddon goes down make a fight all about a mathematical debate . boom instantly Abaddon is no longer unmatched . while his brain can work better than a supercomputer we all know he absolutely hates math . there in one of his flaws . (I'm not a writer by any means just something i thought of and chuckled at) .
Honestly in my opinion there is no need to be nervous while I'm not gonna lie, OP characters can get extremely boring and rather quickly . that is because 99% of them are honestly just "1 dimensional" . But truly my honest opinion you have fleshed all these characters out to the point i would be to sit here and read a good 20-30+ chapters of them just sitting on the couch eating potato chips and nothing else within those chapters and be perfectly content so fear not it's not being op that makes characters boring but the lack of them feeling like someone who you could actually talk to or someone you could just bump into at the store . the way you made them all feel like they had true personalities with actual flaws is one of the main reasons I came to love this story of yours so please write it exactly how you want
To be completely honest with you, when I read this book it makes me want to Google the different gods and goddesses and I've learned a lot because of it, so again thank you. also I do have to ask. is the name Tathamet inspired from Diablo? that's the only source i could find for that name.
As a Norse pagan myself, even I didn't know much about Sif. I can understand the amount of research you had to do to get that much information on her. Also I greatly appreciate the amount of time and research you put into the different religions for this book. Thank you
I don't know what it is about Asherah and Abandon's interactions but I find myself extremely happy when they do interact