Well shidd man ain't nothing I can say back.

3 Chapters in I am writing this review because I want to be narcissistic af. So to start this novel is and will be the best on this website. This book will be 5 stars and we are coming for the top 10. 3 Chapters a day until I feel satisfied with the plot enough as is. Please give me all your constructive criticism as this is my first novel. I know plot probably feels rushed at times, but hang in there my writing will get better. Please leave a review or criticism if you've read anything already. Btw. I ain't no ho as you can see from the synopsis so be ruthless in these reviews please!

This has me dead reading the author's comments on this post LMAO. The first author, I've seen to childishly respond to negative feedback xD. Someone recommend me another novel I can find readers and the author bickering like this its honestly more entertaining then the novel was lol.

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I thoroughly believe the author has created these account reviews for this. It is no gem, there are many faults in his storyline. The mc doesn't always act the way the author portrays him as, sometimes he is literally beyond stupid. aka (ALL Raven Witch chapters) Which clearly shows how he is desperate to create any and all cliffhangers he can, to retain what little audience he has.

I thoroughly believe the author has created these account reviews for this. It is no gem, there are many faults in his storyline. The mc doesn't always act the way the author portrays him as, sometimes he is literally beyond stupid. aka (ALL Raven Witch chapters) Which clearly shows how he is desperate to create any and all cliffhangers he can, to retain what little audience he has.

I thoroughly believe the author has created these account reviews for this. It is no gem, there are many faults in his storyline. The mc doesn't always act the way the author portrays him as, sometimes he is literally beyond stupid. aka (ALL Raven Witch chapters) Which clearly shows how he is desperate to create any and all cliffhangers he can, to retain what little audience he has.

I thoroughly believe the author has created these account reviews for this. It is no gem, there are many faults in his storyline. The mc doesn't always act the way the author portrays him as, sometimes he is literally beyond stupid. aka (ALL Raven Witch chapters) Which clearly shows how he is desperate to create any and all cliffhangers he can, to retain what little audience he has.

I thoroughly believe the author has created these account reviews for this. It is no gem, there are many faults in his storyline. The mc doesn't always act the way the author portrays him as, sometimes he is literally beyond stupid. aka (ALL Raven Witch chapters) Which clearly shows how he is desperate to create any and all cliffhangers he can, to retain what little audience he has.

I thoroughly believe the author has created these account reviews for this. It is no gem, there are many faults in his storyline. The mc doesn't always act the way the author portrays him as, sometimes he is literally beyond stupid. aka (ALL Raven Witch chapters) Which clearly shows how he is desperate to create any and all cliffhangers he can, to retain what little audience he has.

I thoroughly believe the author has created these account reviews for this. It is no gem, there are many faults in his storyline. The mc doesn't always act the way the author portrays him as, sometimes he is literally beyond stupid. aka (ALL Raven Witch chapters) Which clearly shows how he is desperate to create any and all cliffhangers he can, to retain what little audience he has.

J read a comment saying it starts chapter 775, the reason I dropped the novel. You could add up every time the author said, "A few hours later" and it would total a year or 2 at this point. 775 Chapters for 2 months time novel time....

Only took 500 chapters, the novel is moving at chu feng's pace.

Wow, the author actually spent 2 years writing for 2 months in the novel. Congrats I j dropped this. 775 Chapters I bet if I counted all the hours he said in the novel and added them up the whole b4 the apocalypse arc would be much longer than 2 months.

At this point, I've read up to 500 chapters of this novel. I really wish the author would finish an arc of the story before starting another one as there are so many faults in this story. For example, a chapter literally ended with the main character's right-hand man saying something like "So should I change my class" which was completely ignored in the following chapters, and 200 chapters later still was not answered. He introduced 3 items at the beginning of the story. The main character (Smart Man) seems to just be pushing away even though some of them are huge problems for himself. Like buddy, your need for cliffhangers at this point is what is causing me to drop this novel halfway through. FIX THE STORYLINE B4 CREATING MORE!! +Spoilers+ Chapter 500 A quick list I can think of, of things the author will spend another 100+ chapters on. Milkyway City Soulmancer The fking sword he hasn't scratched finishing yet. prob 500+ chpts The double crystal from the beginning of the book The whole "APOCOLYPSE ARC FOR GOD'S SAKE" .... I've seen multiple comments on this already Derek "supposed" class change Luna's Origin