Thanks, It's not my best chapter. But I just finished editing ch 1. So I'll probably come around and edit chapter 2 to edit out some errors and make some improvements.

Thanks for the review! I'm going to try and take these criticisms and consider them when writing further chapters. There are a couple things like #5 which I do currently plan to improve on in more recent chapters. Regarding your question about what caused the fate of the MC at the end of the first chapter, I believe I tried to answer a it a little bit in a cryptic message given to the MC in chapter 3 when he asked Why he was chosen. Although looking back I don't think I really got that across well. And I do plan to explain it in further chapters. Sadly I can't tell you anymore right now since the answer to that question is something I don't plan on revealing until near the end, since it will most likely tie into the ending. Overall: Thank you for the review! I really appreciate the criticism. And it should help me improve in writing future chapters!

This is the best book I have ever seen. Its amazing and highly recommend it. As one of the people to first see this masterpiece I cant recommend it enough.

Wow... this chapter was amazing.

it gets darker as you progress.. Im going to try and bring the funny back soon though.

Thanks, I havent written any webnovels before so I pretty much have no idea what I'm doing. But I'm glad you liked it!

commits suicide once, goes back in time by twenty years. What happens if you commit suicide twice?