I love the intro

The main story itself is very intriguing. It's like a roller coaster of emotional action suspense and exictment. I had to take time to read through the sentences carefully to fully get a grasp of the story and it's worth it

It's quite captivating

It's very touching poetry

This has really captured my interestthe authors flow of ideas is really easy to follow. It's quite the touching story thus far. I recommend it, definitely absolutely touching story.

Im happy that you read my book I feel encouraged to keep on writing. More chapters are on the way

There are rouge security machines roaming about (spoiler warning)

Teen romance, it's all about young love here. I love your design of the character Cassandra Your story development is really good and easy to follow The way you put à separate paet for the characters thoughts is excellent

It's very intriguing

The haunted house it's getting exciting 👻👻

The story is quite interesting Your story development is good. The characters need some work, but they are good. You need to separate some of the paragraphs, punctuate where necessary I'm looking forward to more chapters

The story so far has the quite excellent writing quality. The story development is absolutely divine the whole world set is amazingly done. This is one story that leaves readers wanting more

This is really quite interesting

This is a good one though I'm not an expert on this genre I can vouch for the authors writing ability As far as I have read it's quite an interactive story I love the setting and how the characters are designed.

5.0 it's original quick fast paced The author has made a well blended stew with this piece of work Merging multiple genres under the main one It's like magic

I'm gonna give you a 4.6 The story has a very good Beginning Putting aside the flaws of Grammer syntax errors.. You can review the two chapters later. Keep up the awesome story

What an interesting story

Thank you

I will be releasing more this end

Thank you I hope you stay tuned for more