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Ralph_Fourie

Ralph_Fourie

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2023-05-12 JoinedZambia
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  • Ralph_Fourie
    Ralph_Fourie1mth
    Commented

    I love the intro

    "No Neuralink divergence, no increase in the neural charge either. No fever or increased heart rate... But I'm not surprised." Dr. Amanda Hall said, lifting her dark eyes from the board, a small smile on her face.
    Theryon System: ENGAGED
    Sci-fi · XanaTrygg
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  • Ralph_Fourie
    Ralph_Fourie11mth
    Posted

    The main story itself is very intriguing. It's like a roller coaster of emotional action suspense and exictment. I had to take time to read through the sentences carefully to fully get a grasp of the story and it's worth it

    THIS TRANSMIGRATION SEEMS SOMEWHAT STRANGE...?
    LGBT+ · kittylovely
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  • Ralph_Fourie
    Ralph_Fourie11mth
    Commented

    It's quite captivating

    Ch 3 I still couldn’t have you        
    THIS TRANSMIGRATION SEEMS SOMEWHAT STRANGE...?
    LGBT+ · kittylovely
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  • Ralph_Fourie
    Ralph_Fourie11mth
    Commented

    It's very touching poetry

    Ch 1 Aux. Chapter: Prologue~ To the one I once thought I loved
    THIS TRANSMIGRATION SEEMS SOMEWHAT STRANGE...?
    LGBT+ · kittylovely
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  • Ralph_Fourie
    Ralph_Fourie11mth
    Posted

    This has really captured my interestthe authors flow of ideas is really easy to follow. It's quite the touching story thus far. I recommend it, definitely absolutely touching story.

    Trapped love
    Urban · candyblea
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  • Ralph_Fourie
    Ralph_Fourie11mth
    Replied to Excelhights

    Im happy that you read my book I feel encouraged to keep on writing. More chapters are on the way

    Frozen awakening
    Fantasy · Ralph_Fourie
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  • Ralph_Fourie
    Ralph_Fourie11mth
    Replied to Excelhights

    There are rouge security machines roaming about (spoiler warning)

    "crew prepare ship for landing, get your Harzard gear ready double check weapons have the drones scout the dead ocean and find that signal if this goes well, it's big pay day for everyone with extra bounses."
    Frozen awakening
    Fantasy · Ralph_Fourie
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  • Ralph_Fourie
    Ralph_Fourie11mth
    Posted

    Teen romance, it's all about young love here. I love your design of the character Cassandra Your story development is really good and easy to follow The way you put à separate paet for the characters thoughts is excellent

    Hidden fact
    Teen · Godrica_Abednego
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  • Ralph_Fourie
    Ralph_Fourie11mth
    Commented

    It's very intriguing

    Ch 15 Night Without My Boytoy
    Hidden fact
    Teen · Godrica_Abednego
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  • Ralph_Fourie
    Ralph_Fourie11mth
    Commented

    The haunted house it's getting exciting 👻👻

    Ch 1 Mister Arrogant
    Mister Arrogant And Nana The Ghost
    Fantasy · Gifty90kofoworola
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  • Ralph_Fourie
    Ralph_Fourie11mth
    Posted

    The story is quite interesting Your story development is good. The characters need some work, but they are good. You need to separate some of the paragraphs, punctuate where necessary I'm looking forward to more chapters

    Mister Arrogant And Nana The Ghost
    Fantasy · Gifty90kofoworola
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  • Ralph_Fourie
    Ralph_Fourie11mth
    Posted

    The story so far has the quite excellent writing quality. The story development is absolutely divine the whole world set is amazingly done. This is one story that leaves readers wanting more

    The Art Collector and His Billionaire Lover
    Urban · Anna Baibe
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  • Ralph_Fourie
    Ralph_Fourie11mth
    Commented

    This is really quite interesting

    Ch 10 Chapter 10: Remorse
    The Art Collector and His Billionaire Lover
    Urban · Anna Baibe
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  • Ralph_Fourie
    Ralph_Fourie11mth
    Posted

    This is a good one though I'm not an expert on this genre I can vouch for the authors writing ability As far as I have read it's quite an interactive story I love the setting and how the characters are designed.

    My Three Obsessive Magnate Husbands Are Infatuated With My Beauty
    Urban · Purple_Fantasies74
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  • Ralph_Fourie
    Ralph_Fourie11mth
    Posted

    5.0 it's original quick fast paced The author has made a well blended stew with this piece of work Merging multiple genres under the main one It's like magic

    Ambrosia - Who is The MC?
    Urban · Yalatola
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  • Ralph_Fourie
    Ralph_Fourie11mth
    Posted

    I'm gonna give you a 4.6 The story has a very good Beginning Putting aside the flaws of Grammer syntax errors.. You can review the two chapters later. Keep up the awesome story

    Divine me
    Fantasy · Nivlak
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  • Ralph_Fourie
    Ralph_Fourie11mth
    Commented

    What an interesting story

    Ch 2 - The pet hall -
    Divine me
    Fantasy · Nivlak
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  • Ralph_Fourie
    Ralph_Fourie11mth
    Replied to Grandmasters

    Thank you

    Frozen awakening
    Fantasy · Ralph_Fourie
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  • Ralph_Fourie
    Ralph_Fourie1yr
    Replied to Kaiga_providence

    I will be releasing more this end

    Ch 1 The scavengers
    Frozen awakening
    Fantasy · Ralph_Fourie
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  • Ralph_Fourie
    Ralph_Fourie1yr
    Replied to LegalWolf

    Thank you I hope you stay tuned for more

    Frozen awakening
    Fantasy · Ralph_Fourie
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