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"adaptability of humans" Humans actually scale fairly low on adaptability compared to other intelligent fantasy creatures, the only reason why humans are alive and coexisting in those worlds is that the author of those fiction doesn't know how to be realistic.

he's an entirely different species, it's impossible for an human to be racist against it, kind of like how humans kill ferial hogs.

he should stop 9/11 to prevent the "patriot act" and the further gun control that will follow, the changes the followed 9/11 weren't exactly positive. and he can just kill the terrorist groups himself, preventing future terrorist organizations, from forming by the cia, which created more religious extremist, it also prevents the mass migration of 3rd world Arabs into Europe. also he's supposed to be an hero, his first goal should be like what iron man did, global peace, since any global aggressions or genocides taking place could be stopped by him, without global outcry, as that can only happen if they know what was going on, and since he has invisibility tech.

pretty sure no one would believe he actually could read that fast,

for thoughts, can you use 'blank' instead of "blank"? since "" means talking out loud and i think, "This should be DC; why a Marvel name drop?" is supposed to be an inner thought

i bet that the hobo is legit crazy

'If I'm Clark Kent, shouldn't I be sent to Earth to be raised by Martha and Jonathan Kent? What am I doing in the middle of space?' I thought to myself while remembering the events of the Man of Steel, 'Whatever happened, I am here, and I am Kryptonian'.

who cares? as long as the author doesn't quit, it's all good.

if he thought like that, he couldn't have lifted the hammer.

seeing as this already have an massive plot hole, plus the god seems to have an mild brain defect, i'm going to have to stop here, this isn't for me, i'm all for an nerfed Madara, unlike the other commenters, i don't really care. but when it's explicitly stated he can only have one wish, but then he made Mutiple, because yes, wishing to be someone else, + having your memories retained are different wishes, if the author made better word choices, and didn't make those wish rules, it wouldn't have triggered me as much, but he did, and he broke them in the same chapter. he should have just wished to be the avatar, simple, and powerful. unlike his "be Madara" wish, since every time he adds "and" that's an additional wish, no negation should be allowed. the god also seems to be extremely incompetent. so far this style of writing just isn't for me.

can we all just accept that this wish is void? if he doesn't want his consciousness replaced then he should get an new wish, because wishing to be someone, and keeping your memories is two distinct wishes. him being nefted doesn't just give him an new wish or bargaining power, the neft is going to happen and is supposed to be hardlined and non negotiable, i though this was mentioned in the satama wish? that guy didn't get an chance to change his wish or negotiate for an weaker version of the power, it was straight nefted without warning. to be honest, he should have learned from that dragon ball wish, body snatching goku, "i wish to have the body of the strongest in the world" he then could have the body of the avatar, or an spirt. it's that simple to make an wish without making an massive plothole.

not how that works, when he wants to BE someone, that means complete replacement of memories and thoughts, so essentially, he asked to have his original brain and memories wiped, since that's what it means to BE someone else. also, if the powers isn't compatible, then the power gets deleted, like that satama fanboy

if negotiation was possible, then the one punch guy could have backed off, and chose something else. story so far seems wonky

ki and chakra are different things, and behaves differently, you NEED to be the avatar to use more then one element, if you aren't, then it breaks the rules of the world, so no, jutsu shouldn't work

the average American is richer then most other countries in the world, except an handful.

one of the best fanfic on this website, although their are still some flaws, and cringy things that the mc does, also, don't expect the mc to be consistent, his behavior sightly changes every time he's in an fictional world, although the mc doesn't know the movies, also, expect him to act in ways you don't think he would do in another movie world, like how in one movie, he's skeptical of what others are saying, but in the Nightmare on Elm Street movie, he Easly believed what the kids are saying about the nightmare demon, when he had no reason to believe them other then for plot progression. i read this on an mtl site, since the chapters aren't locked, i use this site to read the comments. this is one of the very good fanfics available,

i bet she thinks luke is wearing an wig,

doesn't he have an secretary? why is he hiring some random cashier he just met in an market, to buy all his suspicious things? i guess that's how he got turned into an slave with his non existent judgment skills.

it doesn't work like that, what's the % of shares does he have? if it's not 100% i doubt the other shareholders will just let him sell the company an pocket all the money, i think what you meant was that he sold his shares of the company, to other shareholders, and he's an hundred millionaire, and he doesn't have any bodyguards or security? i doubt any rift raft survivor could just go in and ransack his home.