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CatasOR8

CatasOR8

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Goal: to release a mind blowing novel one day

2023-05-06 JoinedNigeria
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  • CatasOR8
    CatasOR824d
    Posted

    I am open to any questions and curiosities

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    My Divine Tree System
    Fantasy · CatasOR8
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  • CatasOR8
    CatasOR827d
    Replied to Haplo484

    Thanks for the review. Yeah, you bet I was disappointed since it wasn't what I was expecting, but it's cool nonetheless. Your preference I suppose 😁😁 I want to say to keep reading, at least until the free chapter is over. If you do you would notice that I elaborated on the reason and it wasn't just because of the excuse that he stated himself. Either way, it's cool, all is good. Since you took the time to review and was explicit on how good it was before that part. I appreciate the effort you took to give the novel a chance. Really, I do 😑😑

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    My Divine Tree System
    Fantasy · CatasOR8
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  • CatasOR8
    CatasOR828d
    Replied to Haplo484

    How about thinking of it in this direction; he is revising the plan with the involved members just moments before putting it into action, as he had assumed most were in the ballroom

    "Remember the plan. We go in, kill the Imperial's delegates and take the king of Emedia as our hostage to guarantee our safe passage out. Is that clear". Ordered the first man that spoke.
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    My Divine Tree System
    Fantasy · CatasOR8
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  • CatasOR8
    CatasOR82mth
    Replied to Kevin2164

    I deeply apologize for that

    Ch 35 No Ordinary Being
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    My Divine Tree System
    Fantasy · CatasOR8
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  • CatasOR8
    CatasOR84mth
    Posted

    The first volume is completed and unto the next one. If there are any questions or curiosity before you start reading, you can ask below. That is what this review is meant for.

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    Sorcerer's Path
    Fantasy · CatasOR8
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  • CatasOR8
    CatasOR85mth
    Replied to mohamed_sabry

    Dear reader, you have no idea how much of a mood-changer your comment is to my work.Have no fear, Sorcerer's Path is never going to be left incomplete

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    Sorcerer's Path
    Fantasy · CatasOR8
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  • CatasOR8
    CatasOR89mth
    Replied to TheAncientOnell

    😂😂😂

    Ch 1 Death And Destruction
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    Sorcerer's Path
    Fantasy · CatasOR8
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  • CatasOR8
    CatasOR89mth
    Replied to TheAncientOnell

    Sister not brother

    Reality Is A Bitch
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    Sorcerer's Path
    Fantasy · CatasOR8
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  • CatasOR8
    CatasOR89mth
    Replied to TheAncientOnell

    Let me explain his mentality as of current.He is a teenager who has only known pain all his life. The only person he considers as family, got killed in front of him. And as it turns out, he absorbed her memories after she died.He saw how much she loathes the world and as a tribute to her death, he decided on world destruction, to eradicate the world that has shown him nothing but unfairness.One thing to note here is that he was looking at the world in a one-sided way. He lived in the street where death is common while things like guilt or conscience are considered a weakness.

    This wasn't the time for him to mope around, not when the mission is yet to be over. He promised Alex to purge the world of its rottenness, and he will not stop until his mission is accomplished.
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    Sorcerer's Path
    Fantasy · CatasOR8
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  • CatasOR8
    CatasOR89mth
    Replied to TheAncientOnell

    Ding, you are wrong. First, he is not tyrannical, he is rational and open-minded, yet cold when the situation demands. And second, he won't just be getting powers left and right, nor will he easily awaken the system.To understand my words without having any spoilers, read the synopsis again.

    Reality Is A Bitch
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    Sorcerer's Path
    Fantasy · CatasOR8
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  • CatasOR8
    CatasOR811mth
    Replied to Joao_Pires

    I appreciate expressing your concerns and even I am well aware of that. The whole plot has not changed one bit. My goal is to write about a character with the ability to create weapons as a form of his magical attribute, craft several other items, and master them using his platinum ability. That hasn't changed one bit. Why I decided to change the start of the story is to find something unique to the character, to express him in a comfortable way that will not seem overdoing or underdoing. And I have found the perfect character for this start is the main story, and it is here to stay. So therefore my dear reader, bear with my inconsistency for it will not happen again.

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    Sorcerer's Path
    Fantasy · CatasOR8
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  • CatasOR8
    CatasOR81yr
    Commented

    This chapter feels forced, like trying to raise the Mc profile which honestly is just all wrong. Instigating a fight with someone stronger than you is a dumb thing to do for a 23-year-old. Though I have to admit that his actions so far have shown that he is not as smart as his age. There is also the typical troupe of the character promising to not use their skill, giving the Mc an advantage, why? If you were that honourable, to begin with, you would not have stooped so low to picking on a kid.

    Ch 29 The Duel, Part 2
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    New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live
    Games · Galanar
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