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  • definetlyundead
    definetlyundead8mth
    Replied to Kazuya_05

    The thing, I don't wanna spoil, but I think it will be revealed in the next 3 chaps. I'm planning it for chapter 9, but the plan's not settled yet

    There was something on this boy, but what was it?
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  • definetlyundead
    definetlyundead8mth
    Replied to Kazuya_05

    Kinda, yeah. Bug he doesn't know it's avalon

    There was something on this boy, but what was it?
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  • definetlyundead
    definetlyundead8mth
    Replied to Kazuya_05

    red like the colour blood happens to be

    Red.
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  • definetlyundead
    definetlyundead8mth
    Replied to Ouroboros_Outings

    Nice to hear

    Ch 1 Fast
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  • definetlyundead
    definetlyundead8mth
    Replied to Zach_S

    I tried my best and there were really a lot. I guess I corrected only half of it, so if anyome still finds some, just write a paragraph comment and I'll fix it

    Ch 1 Meeting(2)
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  • definetlyundead
    definetlyundead8mth
    Replied to Ouroboros_Outings

    Glad that it's to your liking. You're the first reviewer so I'll never forget you. And I don't plan on dropping this, I just have few time for writing.

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  • definetlyundead
    definetlyundead9mth
    Replied to Reader_Who_Reads

    fixed it. if you find anything else just report it

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  • definetlyundead
    definetlyundead9mth
    Replied to ArtoriaSimp

    That is called disguise

    The purple one could also be just a child, but shirou wasn't able to determine because of the purple oni-mask on his face.
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  • definetlyundead
    definetlyundead9mth
    Replied to MCoronado

    if you would see the office pen of your mother that she used to write with during her lifetime, would you say 'omg'? Just kidding, that's a bad example, but for your information:He sensed it, but this chapter wasn't in his pov, so I didn't wrote about it.

    Ch 1 First Blood
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  • definetlyundead
    definetlyundead9mth
    Replied to 1000IronBladeHero

    at least thats how she died in the normal story

    "You knew it … my … Son."
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  • definetlyundead
    definetlyundead9mth
    Replied to Adiavts

    He's male

    "Oh, I completely forgot to introduce myself. My name's Sora Hayate, Master, a magi specialised in barrier magic."
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  • definetlyundead
    definetlyundead9mth
    Replied to Unknown_Wizard

    Don't worry, unfortunately I'm on a vacation right now so I don't have much time to write

    Ch 1 History
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  • definetlyundead
    definetlyundead9mth
    Commented

    And that’s him. I personally like his design a lot.

    He had long brown hair with red strands and wore glasses over his brown eyes. He wore a black kimono with white ornaments and had a calculating, but somewhat kind face.
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  • definetlyundead
    definetlyundead9mth
    Commented

    So that’s him. I hope he looks a little like you imagined him.

    In front of him there was a little boy with an age of approximately between thirteen and fifteen. He had messy black hair and piercing golden eyes. As he realised what happaned, he got up. Now, you could admire him completely in the moonlight. He wore a white shirt and a black cloth around his neck, which covering his shirt partly, too. It was laced with a golden line at his under part of the neck. An expensive looking golden necklace was layed above the cloth. His shirt's sleeves and his black pants were ardorned with golden ornaments.
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  • definetlyundead
    definetlyundead9mth
    Commented

    I think she’s loosing her 50/50, poor girl

    That was what the earrings were for, by bringing something that belonged to the man, Bazett hoped to maximise her chances of summoning him. Not to say that it was a guarantee however, the summoning was in the end, completely random, just with a significantly greater chance of summoning a specific hero if a related catalyst was used.
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  • definetlyundead
    definetlyundead9mth
    Commented

    Rizzkara Himshino

    With a twinkle in his eyes, he turned his gaze towards Kana. As he observed her reaction, he noticed a delicate blush creeping across her cheeks, transforming her into a captivating shade of red, reminiscent of a ripe tomato. His lips curved into a mischievous grin, and he tilted his head ever so slightly, exuding an air of irresistible charm. "Look at you, all flustered," he murmured, his voice a velvety whisper. "Seems like my charisma never fails~"
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  • definetlyundead
    definetlyundead9mth
    Replied to DespairHope

    don’t laugh, he got a point there

    Ch 36 A Mother's Sacrifice
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  • definetlyundead
    definetlyundead9mth
    Commented

    so aqua is the iq guy and aka the eq guy. That’s another two halfs of the same coin

    This is my direction with Ellie, I realized that Ellie and Aikara being antagonistic toward each other doesn't suit his character so I wanted to change it. But I also don't want to discard the chapter before so I made it like this, which I think is a feasable direction given his character. After all, he has high EQ so he will obviously understand that Ellie's only doing this because of her worry, which he can't find to hate.
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  • definetlyundead
    definetlyundead9mth
    Replied to SUS

    the jacket is fire

    (Image here)
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  • definetlyundead
    definetlyundead9mth
    Replied to Shekuni

    That’s your only thought? What a monster!

    She placed her bloody hand on the door, using her arm to embrace Aqua and Aikara. "Ruby, Aqua, Aikara, I love you."
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