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Mortimer_Darkbane

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2023-05-06 JoinedGlobal
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  • Mortimer_Darkbane
    Mortimer_Darkbane2mth
    Posted

    Ntr is trash, MC is a simp, worst story. Absolutely waste of time. Lolololololololol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol

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  • Mortimer_Darkbane
    Mortimer_Darkbane3mth
    Posted

    The battles are just dragged out and straight up boring, The MC clearly have the power to solo One piece but still struggles miserably because of lame writing. The MC before getting system was able to go against white beared and Roger, but after getting the system and becoming tremendously more powerful, he still struggles against an old white beard and Garp. Also MC doesn't know how to take revenge, he just kills a bunch of old guys who only have a few years left to live in the name of revenge. The revenge was truly unsatisfactory.

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  • Mortimer_Darkbane
    Mortimer_Darkbane4mth
    Replied to MARLENE_ANGEL

    I won't be quitting, It's just that I have a lot of work. But I will provide atleast one chapter per day.

    Ch 78 The Night the World Trembled
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  • Mortimer_Darkbane
    Mortimer_Darkbane4mth
    Replied to Daythyme21

    Thanks for pointing it out, I will edit it. Please point out any other mistakes or unreadable stuff in this novel when you read more chapters.

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  • Mortimer_Darkbane
    Mortimer_Darkbane4mth
    Replied to Christian_Zanier

    I won't be quitting, but since the Christmas vacation is over I don't have much free time. But I will still upload at least one chapter daily, and more on weekends.

    Ch 73 Uchiha Yami's Dominance on the Battlefield
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  • Mortimer_Darkbane
    Mortimer_Darkbane4mth
    Replied to Shashwat_Yadav_4481

    I won't be quitting, but since the Christmas vacation is over I don't have much free time. But I will still upload at least one chapter daily, and more on weekends.

    Ch 73 Uchiha Yami's Dominance on the Battlefield
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  • Mortimer_Darkbane
    Mortimer_Darkbane4mth
    Commented
    If you want to suck Uchiha, then he will suck others.
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  • Mortimer_Darkbane
    Mortimer_Darkbane4mth
    Replied to I_Am_YourDad

    Nah bro, I put many hours of work in translating, editing and proof reading,etc... all for nothing in return. All I want is to entertain you guys, but I am not obliged to do this even after getting hate comments like that. So this book is officially dropped. If you want you can read it from somewhere else.

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  • Mortimer_Darkbane
    Mortimer_Darkbane4mth
    Replied to Krasher024

    Thanks for letting me know. I am dropping this fanfic right now, I don't get anything from this.If I wanna deal wit, this kinda hate comments, then there is no point in posting .

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  • Mortimer_Darkbane
    Mortimer_Darkbane4mth
    Replied to ARSENAL_101

    My christmas vacation is over, So I don't have much free time, But I'm still updating daily.

    Ch 61 Yamigakure's Calm Before the Storm
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  • Mortimer_Darkbane
    Mortimer_Darkbane4mth
    Replied to Reign_Bloodark

    You need Mangekkyo to control the ninetails, but the eyes that will manifest on ninetails will be just three tomoe sharinggan.

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  • Mortimer_Darkbane
    Mortimer_Darkbane4mth
    Replied to machadogbc

    I wouldn't call it female lead, But MC will be having a single female with him. But she just appears like two or three chapters at the very end of the novel. Romance is not the main focus of this novel.

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  • Mortimer_Darkbane
    Mortimer_Darkbane4mth
    Commented

    if you're an author and like the idea of this novel,then feel free to use it,just tell me the novel name in comments, so I can also enjoy it

    Kyōka Suigetsu
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  • Mortimer_Darkbane
    Mortimer_Darkbane4mth
    Replied to xdestruct0x

    This is an original fanfic, written by myself

    Ch 5 On hold
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  • Mortimer_Darkbane
    Mortimer_Darkbane4mth
    Replied to DarkKnight32

    well I also done some research about it and found out a normal human will survive around 5 to 30 seconds after their head is cut off. Since Sarutobi is not a normal guy and is also a really strong guy, he should be able to survive more than that. Also once a person's head is cutoff they won't able to talk, but since ninja world have chakra, I think he can use it to enhance his voice or something like that. Anyway no need to take it too seriously, after all it's just a fanfic, so just enjoy it.

    Sarutobi Hiruzen's head muttered.
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  • Mortimer_Darkbane
    Mortimer_Darkbane4mth
    Replied to Shehroz

    I am trying to improve, English is actually my second language. Also I'm actually focusing on faster updates with 10 or more chapters a day. If I focus hardly on improving the writing quality, them I will need to proof rad it multiple times and do multiple editing, which will inevitably slow the speed of updating. If my guess is correct if I did that I would only be able to give 4 or so chapters per week.

    Ch 26 Uchiha Yami's Triumph
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  • Mortimer_Darkbane
    Mortimer_Darkbane4mth
    Commented

    Chapters are becoming longer and longer , and editing is becoming harder and harder,

    The conversation between the two became somewhat silent.
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  • Mortimer_Darkbane
    Mortimer_Darkbane4mth
    Replied to Daoist730sPk

    It's a fanfic, don't take it too seriously

    Ch 10 The Devastating Battle in Konoha
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  • Mortimer_Darkbane
    Mortimer_Darkbane4mth
    Posted

    Like I said in the synopsis, this is a chinese translation, but I had tried my best to remove all the chinese elements from this novel. The Mc in this novel will be an evil person, so those who like evil MC who don't follow the original main characters and make his own choices , then please feel free to read this.

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  • Mortimer_Darkbane
    Mortimer_Darkbane4mth
    Commented
    In Uchiha Itachi's eyes, just as his Susanoo raised its sword for the killing blow, the ground trembled. From the very earth itself, a shadow rose to meet the red giant. This was a creature of bone and armor, a swirling vortex of inky darkness, coalescing into a humanoid form draped in billowing shadows. It held no weapons, yet emanated an aura of power no less intense than Itachi's. This was Uchiha Kai's Susanoo, as dark and enigmatic as its master.
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