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The battles are just dragged out and straight up boring, The MC clearly have the power to solo One piece but still struggles miserably because of lame writing. The MC before getting system was able to go against white beared and Roger, but after getting the system and becoming tremendously more powerful, he still struggles against an old white beard and Garp. Also MC doesn't know how to take revenge, he just kills a bunch of old guys who only have a few years left to live in the name of revenge. The revenge was truly unsatisfactory.
Thanks for pointing it out, I will edit it. Please point out any other mistakes or unreadable stuff in this novel when you read more chapters.
Nah bro, I put many hours of work in translating, editing and proof reading,etc... all for nothing in return. All I want is to entertain you guys, but I am not obliged to do this even after getting hate comments like that. So this book is officially dropped. If you want you can read it from somewhere else.
You need Mangekkyo to control the ninetails, but the eyes that will manifest on ninetails will be just three tomoe sharinggan.
if you're an author and like the idea of this novel,then feel free to use it,just tell me the novel name in comments, so I can also enjoy it
well I also done some research about it and found out a normal human will survive around 5 to 30 seconds after their head is cut off. Since Sarutobi is not a normal guy and is also a really strong guy, he should be able to survive more than that. Also once a person's head is cutoff they won't able to talk, but since ninja world have chakra, I think he can use it to enhance his voice or something like that. Anyway no need to take it too seriously, after all it's just a fanfic, so just enjoy it.
I am trying to improve, English is actually my second language. Also I'm actually focusing on faster updates with 10 or more chapters a day. If I focus hardly on improving the writing quality, them I will need to proof rad it multiple times and do multiple editing, which will inevitably slow the speed of updating. If my guess is correct if I did that I would only be able to give 4 or so chapters per week.
Chapters are becoming longer and longer , and editing is becoming harder and harder,
Like I said in the synopsis, this is a chinese translation, but I had tried my best to remove all the chinese elements from this novel. The Mc in this novel will be an evil person, so those who like evil MC who don't follow the original main characters and make his own choices , then please feel free to read this.