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What is the MC's purpose? I'm not getting it. He hurts heroes, causes destruction for what? I know for the points, but it doesn't seem like he's helping in any way. It's not money, because it's never mentioned. Hopefully you'll show the reasoning behind his actions.
The Hulk shouldn't have won this battle. He acts like he didn't know about the hulk getting stronger the madder he gets. Why hasn't he investigated his ship? Author, your losing me. I love fan fictions but they should be somewhat accurate power wise.