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so i am at 40-50. story and the world is good but the writing style is so ass. like why every author on webnovel love to repeat some words (example, author has used scowled and grimaced a million times already). and also there's a lot of over explanation as if author is trying too hard. ik when u start your first novel you tend copy others like copying thr explanation of an object. i by no mean trying to hate but i wanted to know that did the writing improve? or did no one gave the advice to the author to improve? i will still read the story, it's just the experience makes me a bit hesitant. love to the author for the awesome world and power system he build.
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2 times now
There was no point in arguing with them now, they could only believe in them for now. - An1k3tk9mthCommentedAnd like that, a beautiful friendship formed.
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NAAAAAAH DUDE!
He had no idea what he was talking about but it seemed to work, she had calmed down a bit, as the ceremony ended the chief and Albert walked back to Tyler and Liz, they were accompanied by someone else this time, it was the lady he had saved at the gate, she saw his gaze aimed at her and her cheeks heated up a bit and she avoided making eye contact. - An1k3tk10mthCommented
Ntr....NOOOOOOOOOOO
The man looked at her and smiled, he asked in a low and gentle voice. "Are you okay?" She felt a weird feeling bubbling inside her. "Huh... y-yes am... I am fine." She didn't know why she was like this perhaps it was the fact that she came so close to death, or perhaps it was the fact that this man saved her life or maybe it was something else. "Don't worry your husband is safe, he asked us to save you." - An1k3tk10mthReplied to It_Is_Me_TttCh 23 C23. Ice Queen
- An1k3tk10mthReplied to prajwalsuma96Ch 23 C23. Ice Queen
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wait till you see the dumb mc
He tightened the grip on his blade, his fingers digging into his skin. He knew he wasn't the strongest demon lord in the continent, in fact he was ranked last and was no longer even considered a demon lord, but he couldn't believe there would be a day when he would feel this week. - An1k3tk10mthCommented
little timmy
"See, see, I told you..." Little Timmy was quite pleased with the compliment and his short tail did nothing to hide this, his face was plastered with a beaming smile. He was Albert and Erin's next-door neighbor and his father had died in battle more than five years ago so he had taken a liking to Albert who always took care of him. - An1k3tk10mthReplied to It_Is_Me_Ttt
bruh...it's fiction. blame the writer. he has something in mind obviously
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too many chills in this novel. every novel i read, there's always a repeated word lol- example sigh in author's pov
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mc after using tier 1 spell:
Tier 1 Control Magic - Wave of Despair. - An1k3tk10mthCommented
indeed there is. hach will die
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why everyone saying that mc is dumb? it's clearly lazy writing. author wanted mc to meet these girls(prediction, not a spoiler).
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soon to be run
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why character info again ?
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he needs to eat vegetables
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