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DaoistFCWsMR

DaoistFCWsMR

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  • DaoistFCWsMR
    DaoistFCWsMR1d
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    one of the best webnovels out there, the author really cares to paint a world that feels populated with real people that actually make sense, instead of bidimensional props to make a bland, featureless MC look good.

    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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  • DaoistFCWsMR
    DaoistFCWsMR5mth
    Commented

    get better soon. take a longer break if you need to, enjoy the holidays, man. I hope you get back at writing Supreme Magus with the passion that made it one of the greatest works of fiction in this platform.

    Ch -1 Hiatus Notice
    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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  • DaoistFCWsMR
    DaoistFCWsMR5mth
    Commented

    what a tough read this is, after waiting more than a weak, getting this mess of a chapter is such a disappointment. The tonal shift between epic and ominous to ridiculous Benny hill theme type shenanigans feels like writer just doesn't know what to do with his story so he's trying and failing everything at once. seriously I wish he would pick a lane and stick to it long enough for a natural conclusion, instead of undercutting the tension with slapstick humor, ruining his own setting and characters on the process, turning them into clowns and the plot into a circus.

    "Let's not rush this, okay?" The Leviathan shrunk to his human form, holding his hands with the palms out in a peace gesture. "Things were said but no one got hurt so no harm no foul.
    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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  • DaoistFCWsMR
    DaoistFCWsMR6mth
    Commented

    "the sparkling of metal, the shiny gems, the majestic elemental power!" - The Babies

    As for the babies, they only say the sparkling of metal, the shiny gems, and the majestic elemental power. They giggled at the light show, almost forgetting about the soap bubbles.
    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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  • DaoistFCWsMR
    DaoistFCWsMR6mth
    Commented

    what does it mean for the armor to be understated???

    The armor was light, understated and did not restrain his movements at all. It also made no sound when he moved. Perfect equipment for someone who likes to lurk in the shadows!
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • DaoistFCWsMR
    DaoistFCWsMR6mth
    Replied to sin64920

    for every pan there's a lid that fits

    Ch 2778 Due Process (Part 2)
    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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  • DaoistFCWsMR
    DaoistFCWsMR6mth
    Replied to Piter_Teixeira_5713

    shhhh... não expõe o legion desse jeito cara, daqui a pouco todo mundo vai perceber q ele parou de prestar atenção no que escreve faz tempo

    "Dya." Elysia nodded, finding the matter ridiculous.
    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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  • DaoistFCWsMR
    DaoistFCWsMR6mth
    Commented

    when author endengers children to move the plot forward so much that even the characters themselves stop taking it seriously

    "Isn't that the same thing that always happens with Lith?" Aran countered pointedly.
    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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  • DaoistFCWsMR
    DaoistFCWsMR6mth
    Commented

    I was rereading the novel, and I'm at the Ranger arc, where the courts are properly introduced. I gotta say, what a nosedive in writing quality this novel took. The courts were portrayed as individual organizations, each with their own views on the world and operation systems. Now they are just some scrooges that make me cringe when the author uses them to manufacture tension. It's so shallow it's disappointing. Vastor's evolution looks hype and all, it's a shame it got mixed up with the lazyest antagonists and most contrived scene to ever appear in this story.

    Ch 2776 Old Monster (Part 2)
    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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  • DaoistFCWsMR
    DaoistFCWsMR6mth
    Replied to Littlezoid

    maybe

    At that point, he knew that unless the Guardians of Garlen decided to intervene it was over.
    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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  • DaoistFCWsMR
    DaoistFCWsMR6mth
    Replied to Hepha

    kid probably dies in agony

    Ch 18 Absence of Light
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • DaoistFCWsMR
    DaoistFCWsMR6mth
    Replied to BookDragonling

    but his flaw was supposed to be the counterpart of a divine blessing. tell me, should it be easy to avoid?

    Ch 18 Absence of Light
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • DaoistFCWsMR
    DaoistFCWsMR6mth
    Replied to Flammenwurfer

    you're wrong

    Ch 18 Absence of Light
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • DaoistFCWsMR
    DaoistFCWsMR6mth
    Commented

    the way author conveyed how Sunny's Flaw is applied was amazing, everyone that thinks otherwise is wrong. these scenes with the "oh cr*p" moments of realization how deep in s*it the kid is were WAY better than having it stated in a System message. it's 'Show, don't tell' at it's finest.

    Ch 18 Absence of Light
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • DaoistFCWsMR
    DaoistFCWsMR6mth
    Commented

    a laughed hard here

    "What are you thinking about?"
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • DaoistFCWsMR
    DaoistFCWsMR6mth
    Commented

    is shadow slave or supreme magus older? are they ripping each other off or are they both plagiarizing some other work? because this is grounds for a copyright infringement if I ever seen one...

    "As your soul core develops, the body gets rid of all its imperfections. So it's hard to find an unattractive Awakened, especially among the stronger ones. Live long enough, and you might just become a flower boy yourself."
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • DaoistFCWsMR
    DaoistFCWsMR6mth
    Commented

    oh boy, it's the Jim Carrey's movie version of the curse: he not only cannot lie, but is compelled to be as honest as possible. RIP sunny, his suffering shall be my amusement

    "Your breasts."
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • DaoistFCWsMR
    DaoistFCWsMR6mth
    Commented

    almost

    Mesmerized, Sunny almost missed the fact that there was a shoulder insignia on the woman's left sleeve. There were three stars on it.
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • DaoistFCWsMR
    DaoistFCWsMR6mth
    Replied to Blue_Eagle

    "did you get a true name?" -hahahaha imagine me getting a true name, that's a fertile imagination you have sir(did not lie, did not expose having a true name, did not sit there in awkward silence)

    Flaw Description: [You cannot lie.]
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • DaoistFCWsMR
    DaoistFCWsMR6mth
    Replied to Bengal

    as of now, it literally can't be more popular than it is in this platform

    Ch 15 Shadow Slave
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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