Bro i gave it a try but i will have to say your English is very poor . I could barely understand your language , i am sorry but i can't anymore and surprisingly your plot is very poor as well .

Bro i gave it a try but i will have to say your English is very poor . I could barely understand your language , i am sorry but i can't anymore and surprisingly your plot is very poor .

Brother everything is ok but how can someone change there Qi method , it is said that if you change it , you will have to start from beginning . Isn't this a loop hole in the story .

yes you are correct or else , always they make him a alchemist

I really appreciate your this idea of introducing system points and and qi cultivation like this , it is truly admirable till now .

Story is really predictable and much less exciting . I have already lost my taste in this story . Sorry author san ....but i can't go any further .

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I am the author and I give 5 stars , I don't give a dam about what others think or say on this , ofcourse not on novel , on my comment . Enjoy and any questions will be responded .

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Nice chapter !!!👍👍👍👍

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Nice coincidence !!!🤣🤣🤣🤣

Nice one bro .... continue writing . I will surely read it .

More chapters , the story lines seems to be promising .

The problem is Nal Yanran , she is a bitch and I can't see her happy , may be you can call it my obsession .

Without reading , it's a noncence story with no base and i despise such pathetic writing . Truly , I am depressed , what was writer thinking while writing this story . Just by reading the synopsis I wanted to cough up a mouthful of blood . " Eww.... yech... "

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Great chapter bro , author here .

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