I really like how Davis properly cares about loyalty and feels genuine emotion when he suffers a betrayal, many protagonists would ignore or downplay these things for a pretty face, regardless of what may or may not happen later his reaction is very realistic and highlights once again how the author is in tune with his emotions contributing to his writing ability.

These past few chapters have been great, I like these kinds of interactions a lot.

Hmm, I wonder if Davis will ever have a time travel adventure, imagine him meeting his maternal grandmother before she was killed or even a young version of his mother in some alternate timeline, things like the Time Dimension are really fascinating and open up more possibilities.

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Your book gets better the more I read it, good work.

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I honestly wonder what kind of face the old "White Witch" Myria would make if she could see her future lovey dovey self and Davis now, that would be such a hilarious interaction if they went back in time or entered a parallel timeline to see her. I think she would faint on the spot.

Apology accepted, I also apologise for my part in the matter. I'm sorry to hear about your circumstances, it's also harsh that pirates are impacting you to such an extent, it's definitely not fair, the best way to think of it is exposure and advertising, many pirates wouldn't purchase the work to begin with, especially if they live in poorer countries so you can't necessarily count them as lost income. Honestly WebNovel isn't even that great a platform for money. The guy who wrote "Lust Knight" had a Patreon and was making good money with hundreds of members, he switched to WebNovel and lost it all, he didn't appreciate what he had. Regarding Dual Cultivation, trust me I definitely have my problems with that series and author, "writing out of spite", I can see why. Honestly I do think your writing is good, I'm lucky enough to have a decent job with a lot of spare time and have read literally 10 hours a day for years on end so my standards are very high, just from a literacy perspective you are better than 99% of people on WebNovel, if you can just work on creating characters and interactions with soul you'd be on the road to professional standards, something I'd sub to a Patreon for. No need to repeat the review as tbh I just wanted to get my message across to you rather than other people if I think about my original intent. Take care.

Leave it, no point in exacerbating the matter, though it is appreciable you made the offer calming things down a little as people can say/do things they don't mean when they're angry. I admit I was annoyed that my review was deleted and accused as I felt you had good writing skills, but let yourself down by endless amounts of smut with no heart, if that changes after chapter 70 something then that's a good thing, though I feel a review after the free chapters is valid. Anyway good luck with your book.

Google Doc? I didn't use it and I'm not sure why it is relevant, Web Novel is finicky in words and phrases it finds acceptable and will auto ban a review. That is a screenshot from a note, nothing to do with "Google". I really hope you continue without the "xD's", as it makes you look like a five year old.. no offense. You perceived malice and yet you admit that it is a fault you agree with? Which is it? I read the free chapters on my PC and bought 2 chapters ahead, not sure why you're obsessing over this "thief" angle like you're so virtuous, why I've bought plenty of content and even subscribed to the Patreon's of those who deserve it, you however throw tantrums like a child, this despite being a plagiariser who monetizes the ideas and content of other people, perhaps the pot should stop calling the kettle black, especially when it is clearly paranoid about pirates when it should look in the mirror a little. You could introspect a little here, but I doubt you have the self awareness based on what I've seen. "xD"

One other thing, I do have to laugh at you accusing others of theft when your work is clearly plagiarised even if you veered away later the foundation is basically copy and paste from MLB's Dual Cultivation. People see in others the things they hate about themselves. "xD"

I'm not on the discord server, and if I "was" pirating which I'm not saying I even was, that doesn't change the very valid feedback I gave you which could improve your work. You are the one who is clearly butthurt, not sure why you're projecting.

Not sure why you keep using xD is if it is punctuation, I've noticed that in your comments, you sound like a tweaked out South Park character, you do realise that right?

My review is in the image below.........

Per "Dual Cultivation", Su Yang is a cvck, he accepts and approves of his women sleeping with each other for "comfort" including when he isn't around. No matter how you spin it, he will never get rid of the black mark of being a willing cvck, only other cvck's could identify with such a "man". No matter how strong he gets, how powerful his cultivation is, he won't even match a regular mortal man with principles.

I'm glad that the ranking was clarified. It always annoyed me that enemies who tried to kill him and his family seemed to get off lightly and to be honest they still get off lightly.

Heather and Britney were killed already, forgot or retcon?

Done :)

I like the story so much that I created an account to say so. Hey Resurgent, you prefer "Gifts" or Patreon? ...............................