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And another thing, if you are Asian, you should check if what you want to imply is well translated.

It doesn't cover many things, since they are in the United States, 10,000 yuan is equivalent to 1380.55 dollars, and if you say that the prices are in yuan, it is nonsense, because you are making a fic for a US series, you should adapt the prices to the United States, if you tell me that you are adapting them to your continent that is Asian, I understand it, but let us know in advance so that we can adapt them or simply for people who don't like Asian fanfics, don't read them and don't waste your time (Because I know there are people who don't like Asian fics at all)

The story is interesting, the problem is that the development of the races, sometimes Mc himself, are inconsistent. In the fic it says that Mc knows about the world but then in parts as simple as knowing who the heroines are he forgets it, there is also the issue of the demonic race that they are born with a limit of demonic power and that they cannot overcome it, although train you will not be able to exceed that limit.

I think that this chapter needs to make the triforce (Merkel raute) so that users and the media will talk about this fact, the tranquility and strength that it shows against its competitors.

here we are missing the triforce

Of the Modern Family Fics that the reader is super used Mc x Alex and we have to innovate, it doesn't exactly have to be Mc x a girl from Modern Family

If I'm not mistaken, Disney was the creator of Pirates of the Caribbean, so if I'm not mistaken, the MC can make the Pirates of the Caribbean movies.

Data that no one asked for but I give you (XD): Hancock is 1 year older than Robin, Yamato is 2 years younger than Robin, Perona is 3 years younger than Yamato and 5 years younger than Robin, Reiju is 1 year younger than Perona, Los Sanji's brothers, Zoro and Sanji himself is 3 years younger than Reiju, from here goes Nami 1 year younger than them, then followed by Luffy and Ussop 1 year younger than Nami, we continue with Chopper who is 2 years younger than Luffy and finally Shirahoshi is 1 year old.

Muy bueno espero actualizaciones mas seguidas, no se si trancurriendo el tiempo agregaras personajes al harem o solo con las que ya estan, ya que tengo algunos h en mente que podrian estar interesante como los implementas.

Reseña en Español La historia es excelente en muchas cosas, pero no le puedo dar las 5 estrellas simplemente la actualizacion de nuevos capitulos es muy lenta, y es entendible ya que el autor no es una maquina para escribir diario y del igual forma puede haber bloqueos de autor. Quitando la falta de actualizacion todo es excelente y espero que siga publicando mas capitulos. Review in English The story is excellent in many ways, but I can't give it 5 stars, the updating of new chapters is simply very slow, and it is understandable since the author is not a diary writing machine and in the same way there can be author blocks. Aside from the lack of updates, everything is excellent and I hope you continue publishing more chapters.

I was liking the story even though it was very slow, but I stopped reading it for a simple reason that it doesn't go up in full R+18 in full only half goes up and the full goes up on patreon

Well, I think that I leave it here so as not to continue wasting time with this fic, a pity that you do that but I understand you but at least you would have warned about this

I don't know about the others, but it would be interesting to see how those from the marvel world play the resident evil saga, although I know it's Need for Speed