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“Won’t the leadership… notice?”
“Don’t you” not “do you”.
Is this person a “he” or “she”?
Mrs.
I think Lin Fan was rather too rude.
He is being rude and childish.
“Her car” not “his car”.
That would have some mPerfomance! 😂😂
“taking” instead of “bringing”.
Are we talking about the celeb here or what? Is her father being invited? Confussion in the plot.
Rather say “formed a pool”.
According to the author, everyone at that age is said to be “greasy”. Is it societal inclination of the author has some bad experience with that age group?
The author has problems with people around 30-40 years. In his opinion they are always “creasy”. Is it a societal inclination or just the author?
She/her/her: female He/him/his: male
Confusing! Is this character a male or female? In one sentence he/she will be referred to as a “he” and in the next “she”.
Later not alter
Her hand
“With fear”.
“her name” not “his name”.