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Hey entrail, how are you doing? I've been reading tapov for the last 3 weeks and finally i completed it this morning, well is it allright I speak my opinions? 'Beep beep beep' I'll say it anyways. Well I haven't read TNE so I won't compare it to it. Lemme start from the start I really really enjoyed your book, your subtle hints here and there were crazy good the foreshadowing was really unexpectedly real 1)did you plan the whole story from the start or did you gradually developed the story while writing? 2) hah please don't mind it if i be a bit rough don't take it to your heart allright? I didn't very much like the dwarvien "monolith" invasion arc lol you forgot a elf character at the end! That ss grade elf who was there with gravis but dissapeared when Douglas and others came 3) monolith arc was masterfully written!I was on the edge of my seat every chap lol 4)chap 216 was very good, Jin's development was masterfully written. 5)sorry if I be a bit rude, but everything was fine it was a 11/10 read but what happened after chapter 600? That time skip really really was a turning point in the story:/ the pacing of the story really went pityful in the ending chapters, the battle with Lilith got offscreened and characters didn't get enough time for showing their true prowess they accumulated in the 5 year training arc the pillar idea was very unique but not really good imo it really took everything the characters trained for in their training arc their main source of power (mana) got cut off from them it would've been alright if that wasnt the end but all their efforts went up drain. 6)mind sharing what happened?:) The pacing was really great untill 600 you could've easily ended this story around 1200 chaps but it really got rushed (i apologise again)the fights after chapter 600 didn't really tingled me in any way, hemlock died in a pityful manner 7) I went really close to dropping it in many occasions after chap 600 but character interactions were the saving grace you wrote each and every character really well, jezebeth was truly well written and he had a real/believable aspriation for what he did , his dynamic with Ben (og ren hehe) was really great just same as ren and kevin sarcastic jokes and everything lol 8) Romance in tapov was really well handled! I grinned like a idiot in chapter 670 and on many other occasions lol 9) Your subtle jokes about ren dover's name were hilarious! 10) I want to describe my feelings more but that'll be way too long heh you won't like that oh yeah i almost missed it, every Liam fight was my favourite lmao everything Liam did and the way he carried himself throughout the story was really well written (I feel like those annoying reporters in the conference everyone hates but oh well) I loved your book!i enjoyed reading it very much was worth my sleepless nights and red eyes hah, the characters were really well written! Thank you for everything and sorry.