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Ope ope no mi- Victor_Funes2mthReplied to Sammy_Amigo"Miss Liala, Miss Bella. My name is Alpha and the other two are Zeta and Epilson."
- Victor_Funes2mthCommented
no thanks i'm good
"How about it, if you agree... You will become my Onii-chan." - Victor_Funes2mthCommented
blud just need to create a white hole with this fr
"White!" - Victor_Funes2mthReplied to Allpowerful
lol, that's just a realistic way to describe it but if you compare this with mc's that doesn't get a scratch with a Nova-Qua attack, i think is better to be realistic.
Allen didn't want to destroy the sun, so he used an improved version of Purple to create a wormhole to a red sun. Allen grabbed Superman with a furious face and pushed him into the wormhole, but that allowed Superman to pierce Allen's chest with his fist. - Victor_Funes2mthCommented
naw bro this is turning to universal level too quick
Superman Prime: Collapse of the universe - Victor_Funes2mthCommented
bro's back..
[....Off you go and before you leave. My name is not Death. You can call me Sam.] - Victor_Funes2mthCommented
nevermind you deserve to be there.
Oh right, I was scamming people of their money as usual. Well, I'm a Great Pretender after all, a title that was given to me due to my excellent acting skills and courage that I even managed to scam the President's son during a few days before his birthday party. - Victor_Funes2mthCommented
great start as always lol.
Finding myself tied on my feet upside down, I noticed that I'm in some kind of abandoned factory or some shit. - Victor_Funes2mthCommented
YOOO WSP PPL, WE BACK ON BOARD!!
[HEYOHHH! The rewrite fanfic is finally here and many things have changed, I swear. Mc will be more weaker than the previous fanfic protag but in exchange, there would be less OC's and will be able to cover the rest of the chosen worlds that weren't included in the previous fanfic. - Victor_Funes2mthCommented
i'm chilling waiting for the opportunity so you can add this girl down here
"Let's Do it! " Itsuki cheered himself up as he moved towards The Giant Turtle.... - Victor_Funes2mthCommented
basically control over black-holes, i feel like bro is a universal-threat right now but author is nerfing him
The attack is so powerful that it can wipe out entire armies with a single blast. As the Qi wave expands, it generates a powerful gravitational force that sucks in everything around it, crushing and destroying everything within its reach. - Victor_Funes2mthCommented
YAY NEW STORY!
Chapter 1: The Young Master - Victor_Funes2mthCommented
.....women
She already knew her master would be able to fulfil her wish, and that made her a little bit more obsessed with him. Oh! How she wanted to consume him, make him hers forever! - Victor_Funes2mthCommented
now that i think about it, won't apis fruit awakening let her manipulate animals with her thoughts or control them? i just related her to makima for some reason
"This pup is something else; it can hear their thoughts; it's unreal." - Victor_Funes2mthCommented
atmospheric pressure in my opinion is better and is more like the strength of air force, in the other hand weather manipulation is more like soul fruit or the sorcery clima tact and we already have soul fruit with big mom so i expect something new.
By the way, do you think that a devil fruit that allows you to manipulate the weather or one that allows you to manipulate atmospheric pressure would be better? - Victor_Funes2mthCommented
nice, thanks for the chapter
Apis debut. - Victor_Funes2mthCommented
....wild
"Ethan, don't try to resist. You're meant to be mine in this life; no one can take you away." - Victor_Funes2mthCommented
"Pica's tone remained as sharp as ever" ain't no way bro just said that
Pica's tone remained as sharp as ever. "It's unbelievable that he could cause such a commotion before even entering the Grand Line." - Victor_Funes2mthCommented
nice start to
"Take this money and never show your face in this city again."