Dozy_Doodler
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If all she wish for a powerful son then she should chase him to get him back. But why still calling him trash??
A mother never speaks this way. The conversation is very forced
Seriously. he wants to avoid any but use her name which can be easily traced back.
where is this story going?
The writing quality is one of the best. The first chapter made my heart weep for the hero. No one has to suffer a tragic death like him. Author's flow of writing pulled me into the story and it effectively made me feel for the character. Each character written has so depth. We can see that the author put into more effort in creating each character even if they come only for few moments.
Now this is the story I'm waiting for. Everything is great. I mean everything. From the writing, the flow, the world building and characterization everything is beyond what you can imagine. The author took his time to create his own world. This is a novel that is on par with LOTM. The only sad part is the chapters are less.
Lesson learned