Dozy_Doodler
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Dozy_Doodler20dCommented"Ah, well I noticed you weren't back since you left close to two hours ago. I decided to wait in front of your apartment so I would be able to call the police or alert the neighborhood on time if you didn't show up... just in case you were in any form of danger," Angy had a look of relief as she said that.- Dozy_Doodler20dCommented
If all she wish for a powerful son then she should chase him to get him back. But why still calling him trash??
"That trash dares to touch my precious boy..." She muttered with a look of craziness. - Dozy_Doodler20dCommented
A mother never speaks this way. The conversation is very forced
"Hey useless, my only son has received a scholarship to attend MBO academy for young mixed-bloods and is now getting personal training from an Echo ranked mixed-blood!" Gustav's mother added with a prideful glare. - Dozy_Doodler20dCommentedCh 25 Bloodline Acquired
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Seriously. he wants to avoid any but use her name which can be easily traced back.
"It worked,' - Dozy_Doodler20dCommentedThis was where humans realized that the Slarkovs were a peaceful race and they had just killed their kind for nothing.
- Dozy_Doodler21dCommented
where is this story going?
"Please don't regret your words then Dear King" Mikax had seen everyone in the room and knew the 3 children in the room belonged to him, 2 sons and a daughter. "You see I have just about everything a man could ever ask for inside of my pouches, yet, I can't seem to produce a wife for myself. Since you drug me all the way here and I am so very alone, I believe that I should be given a noble offer." While he spoke these words he slowly turned towards the corner of the room where his kids were. - Dozy_Doodler21dCommented"No milady, you must have misunderstood me. He's not the king, it's just what I call him because of his character." The black haired man smiled nervously and she gave a side glance to her master who didn't bother to comment.
- Dozy_Doodler22dPosted
The writing quality is one of the best. The first chapter made my heart weep for the hero. No one has to suffer a tragic death like him. Author's flow of writing pulled me into the story and it effectively made me feel for the character. Each character written has so depth. We can see that the author put into more effort in creating each character even if they come only for few moments.
- Dozy_Doodler22dCommented"ARGH! WHERE IS IT?! WHAT DOOR IS IT? IS IT EVEN A DOOR?! IS IT THE LID ON THE TOILET?! THE DOOR OF THE FRIDGE?! THE CABINET DOOR?! AT LEAST GIVE ME A HINT!"
- Dozy_Doodler22dCommented"Question 'Reality', for it may be but a 'Fiction'."
- Dozy_Doodler22dCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1: Awakening
- Dozy_Doodler23dPosted
Now this is the story I'm waiting for. Everything is great. I mean everything. From the writing, the flow, the world building and characterization everything is beyond what you can imagine. The author took his time to create his own world. This is a novel that is on par with LOTM. The only sad part is the chapters are less.
- Dozy_Doodler23dCommented
Lesson learned
'No!' Spheris screamed in his mind. 'No! Not mother!' He should have killed Nephta. Why didn't he when he had the chance? His only few acts of compassion has come to stab him in the back. "Don't hurt my mother... please." he begged. - Dozy_Doodler23dCommentedDuke Bellunder rubbed on his forehead. The poor man was completely stressed. "In one night, you have managed to release a Level Two Hellbender into the town, destroy the underground caves, almost decimate the foundation this bastion was build, and you've stolen the Essence of our Celestial."
- Dozy_Doodler23dCommented"Shut up, Acko," Dunnam simply ordered.