Nice but you could use some proof reading.

I know that. I'm just complaining. I mean, ffs, he was a topper!

Yeah, If only our hero had put his money where his Diablo was, he could have cleaned up the novice area of all those pesky monsters. After all, Diablo never dies and could have spawned an army of mini-Diablos to take down even the most powerful mobs. But alas, our hero was too busy fulfilling the harem requirement with his love interest, who had all the personality of a cardboard cutout. Maybe the story gets better, but I wouldn’t know - I dropped it faster than a hot potato. And In case you reply back, I'll appreciate it if you could reply back in English.

Make sure to add Eric's mom as a harem member 😈

But it makes sense seeing his backstory.

If Rudy is truly an adult mentally, he should understand that there is nothing to be embarrassed about. It’s a natural thing to do, and his mother surely understands that. Rudy’s discomfort is making his mother uncomfortable, and she remains quiet. Perhaps Rudy is not as mentally mature as he claims to be, and is still just a teenage boy.

"He was the first boy I started to like." I can't quite fathom what he did to charm her, aside from the heroic fall rescue. Quite the classic move, I must say. Well, I hope he doesn't use the same move on every girl.

Kaguya's honest opinion: What a creep, watching me do my work Jk/

What a brilliant idea! 💀

Where

Goodness gracious, dear author is sending every lady to the great beyond just so they can join his parallel world harem. I mean, must every potential love interest meet such a brutal end? It's kind of dull if every chick falls for the MC after he saves them from death. Where's the build-up, the slice of life part? 😂 I hope author gets more creative in the next chapters.

Spoiler alert: Everything was done so he could met the nurse. Classic move, Author.

Seriously? He worked his tail off (not really) to prevent his mom from overworking, yet when she’s pulling overtime, he doesn’t even toss her the cash she needs. Sure, it’s illegal for a student to work, and she might remarry if he spills the beans, but he could’ve come up with some excuse like, “I helped someone clean their pool and they were so grateful they paid me a generous $2500.” I just can’t wrap my head around his logic

She'll be if the author is truly a man of culture.

And seriously? Why is he afraid of a vampire (assuming) with all that power, Author.

There’s nothing immoral about hugging a healthy, young man. In fact, it’s recommended by 9 out of 10 doctors for a quick boost of endorphins.

And cuck moral!!

Men of culture assemble

At first glance, I thought that dog emoji was your attempt to expand your milk horizons into the realm of flavoured milk. I was like, "Dog milk? Now that's a unique twist!" But alas, upon closer inspection, it was just our dear ol' plain cow.💀

Ah, an innocent milk author, u say? But let me assure u, my dear youneedsomemilk, I won't be the one to spill ur milky secrets—secrets of a dairy devotee with a tantalisingly hidden wild side. After all, behind every innocent facade lies the potential for the most captivating, intriguing, and tantalising tales >.>