Changed to Denki Denki no Mi :p

changed it to Sword Mastery. :)

That is actually a very good suggestion, will find some time and go back and change that description.

lol will keep that in mind.

Removed it, seemed too easy for noct to pump points into stamina at the start. Trying to change up the system and bring it more into play in future chapters.

i've been writing for a while, but never to such a large audience and yea this is my first crack at messing about with someone else's story and characters, an extreamly popular one at that ;p

first time writing fanfic so feedback is always appriciated, and thanks for the pointers. i actually planned for noct to start training after escaping lougetown.

thats a good point, i just didnt want to jump into a training montage right off the bat.

Basically my thought process for how the story would progress was based on how i would act if i was in isolation for a long time. Noct reincarneted after god knows how long in the void and right afterwards was stuck on a desert island without a food. *spoilers* so first thing noct did was get some good food then basically he drifted on to lougue town by chance and even then he chose to enjoy himself and indulge in a shopping spree, cant really blame the guy for that :P. he hasnt gotten anytime to settle down and train yet.

No food on the island ;p

all fixed, thanks for pointing it out.

will fix that soon for all chapters.

added the extra part to the chapter.

I actually thought about going that route but decided not to mess too much with strawhat crew's storyline, but in hindsight i should have prolly added in a scene where Noct decides not to go after zoro's sword. Might do a rewrite to add that part in.

That is a very intresting premise i havent thought of yet.