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Iām wondering author will our boy Jun go to a cultivation world, so for the world heās in follows a Martial Arts Realms of power and not a cultivation one, divinties could just be Laws instead making it kinda easier to follow where you upgrade from an Intent to Dao and or then Laws, just a suggestion. Plus of course his Heavens secret tower although heās started a set up will his female companions be more involved in it, will they ever know that he travels to different worlds and planes..? And last but not least will they all ever meet upā¦.??
This is 4yrs later but i do understand what you mean things like this the dynamics between emotions and intellect is never done properly. Because author could have labelled that although he has the memories and experiences of a past life but because heās returned itās forming a balancing act either heās a young man demeanour beyond his age meaning heāll still have those reckless emotions just when needed he can learn to act appropriately or just do what all such stories do and just make them act like kids whilst claiming they disdain this and that š¤¦š¾āāļø. Honestly if anything it should bet a plot whole to then fill in with charater growth but when does that ever happen ššš
Sorry even if iām biased iāve read many novels but this one is just personally for me tops them all especially if weāre talking about cultivation novels, itās nice to have a competent MC, the harem is written well too (harems aināt bad they just need to be written well, especially if the woman actually take part in the story and arenāt just flower vases after MC gets them) the world building just drags you in, even if thereās info dump I actually want to read it and not skip it, although his cultivation is well behind but you canāt judge just based on that nonetheless i do await for whatās it like when he catches up (iām assuming heāll sky rocket with his Mytsic ascenion š dude has like 6 laws already soā¦). If writer is seeing these messages i have a question as although it was mentioned his parents died but there corpses werenāt really found so does that mean theyāre still alive or is there a possibility that they are just curiousā¦?
Iād say the many issues with Harems isnāt the Harem trope itself but the way itās written. The women tend to always become flower vases even when they was heavens blessed etc, pokemon go collect them all etc and it always ruins it. They all need to be in the story and not just part of it, stories are fantasy but if real life thinking is incorporated properly it works well. Take the save a hoe idea, the MC motive could be selfish, only for a benefit he wants not just a happy coincidence at least develop dialogue between the 2, natural flow of feelings i mean shit if you facing 10 different sect 8 different realms this and that immortal pointing your sword at the heavenly but stumped on tje dynamics between men and women like wtf šš, or standing up for his women iād rather the FMC whoop who ever ass needs whooping herself i mean sheās a talented cultivator in her own right is well isnāt she. Or the classic separation, no form of communication whatsoever then you never see her till chapter 1000 or so only to be seperated again. Iām sure like me you could predict the story, say example modern day cultivation stories its, beauty CEO, the assistant, some university chicks bffs + teach, policewoman, rival beauty CEO, some foreigner, hidden sect chicks, some arranged marriage chick from his kicked out of family the order could be same or different but itās too predictable. Nonetheless iāll be starting āRomatic Cultivatorā and reviews look promising but i gotta read it myself first āš¾
Erm author-kun, i (hope) was wondering to will be relinquish his devil bloodline for a better one itās to be honest nerfing him way too much with this holy light attributed attacks, itās not tht its bad but itās basically limiting, now maybe thereās a purpose or story behind it but honestly iād like a never seen before bloodline for the MC, or better yet merge and fuse different bloodlines to form his own new one, one that evolves with him as he gains strength. Just a thought tho nothing personal against the bloodline he has now just itās limiting him we donāt see it much and yes thatās what a trump card should be but itās too easy in your face āheās a devil so use holy light attacksā š¤ itās almost plot armour to account for a loss.
Definitely enjoying the story so far, i do hope to see the girls brought together soon not out of necessity but itās also just a due to happen. What about saki and his daughter how far off author-kun. + the demons invation is that still happeningā¦?? And finally future wise heās sure to leave Blue Star and venture to other realms. Ps.. will we get a cultivation realm world hop. Not to sure if author replies but just some questions.
Author is doing wanders, this amusing as hell, although if thereās anything author could look into (read up to 114) is MC manipulation tactics needs to be more broader he is a villain yes indeed but he should approach different heroines with different tactics because at the end of the day heās doing something villainous by manipulating them but so far itās seems the same all force, what about some slick tactics having them approach him instead after heās spun his web of traps, or use already gotten heroines into manipulating others by proxy you know variety or a challenge into manipulating them without trying to inflict any negative emotions as a challenge. No Iām not asking for a hero iād like more intrigue not just she got big tits iām tryna fu**. But donāt get me wrong author itās definitely interesting till so far š¤£š¤£š¤£š¤£š¤£š¤£
Read up to ch.92 so far an all i can say up till thia point is fantastic. Well systems not been around but itās ok. Peopleās opinions on harems arenāt th best but if written well, where the story revolves around a good plot, just the write amount of snu-snu then it works. Of course up to where i am thereās been no major action but itās still so well written that Iām still captivated.
Definitely enjoyed the story so far, plots good so is the world building and just the right amount of snu-snu for the cultured, if thereās on thing i could change or advise the author on its the round about way that he keeps repeating the same thing just in a different way almost seeming to just fill up more when thereās no need. Plus as cultivation is the one thing that separates them from others (well so far for now Iām assuming theyāre there just later on the story) iād be happy to see it explored more.
Been reading and i must say Iāve definitely enjoyed, the intricacies will keep you intrigued from chapter to chapter, although i do want to see more personal action from MC, and being a avid lover of swords myself seeing itās also the weapon MC uses it definitely needs more screen time. Plus MC power realm needs to keep up itās lagging to far behind iām not asking for the typical 12chpts OP MC hardly, however to nerf him too much is a bitā¦. Nonetheless itās been fantastic so far
We all know itā s coming, harems can be written right yaāll know, keep the femaleās interesting actually involved in the story other than you know what acts plus not useless be it stonger than the MC or like Bing Xue not fall so far behind but it works. Iām not saying he should have a couple 100 girls not at all but for those weāve read care about and actually donāt mind why canāt they just be together.
Not read very far but yes maybe heāll add a harem tag which by all means make sense because unlike many other harems Bai Zeman isnāt collecting them all lile pokemon the 3 girls involved with him also arenāt some bimboās but actually interesting, plus it would be such a buzzkill if at the end he denys them a relationship with MC when all readers can see it, basically not all Harems novels are bad if plot is good enough
Hello š, Iāv recently read up to 124 so Iāve enjoyed the story so far, but like i said maybe iām judging to early and heāll maybe have a character awakening, of course āXiao Moā hasnāt appeared yet but iām hoping on top of him making connections that heās focused more on developing himself with connections on top, in system tropes terms itās the equivalent of i have a system press a button but never try to comprehend the skills. Also asking will we get a more comprehensive view of sword law/intent?? (personal favourite weapon if i do say so myself)
For now i think itās going well, but MC needs to differentiate himself from the rest. If all heāll do is befriend strong characters he himself seems useless. it should centre him and if he befriends or killās the 5 plane children the itās a bonus, all the 5 plane children happen to just make the story more interesting is what Iām saying. Basically what iām saying is i read the story but MC still feels detached, so far his feminine looks seem like the best thing about him when actually his potential is just as great as if not better than the plane children, but i guess maybe Iām judging to much heās still 13 after all. Anyways I donāt know if Author seeās these comments but Iām definitely looking forward to his character development. āš¾āš¾