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  • Monty_Carlo
    Monty_Carlo19d
    Replied to Lorkfsadf

    Does anyone know where this guyā€™s mother disappeared too, because I donā€™t remember reading sheā€™s dead so whatā€™s woth thatā€¦????

    Villain: Manipulating the Heroines into hating the Protagonist
    Eastern Ā· Evil_Villain
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  • Monty_Carlo
    Monty_Carlo1mth
    Commented

    Iā€™m wondering author will our boy Jun go to a cultivation world, so for the world heā€™s in follows a Martial Arts Realms of power and not a cultivation one, divinties could just be Laws instead making it kinda easier to follow where you upgrade from an Intent to Dao and or then Laws, just a suggestion. Plus of course his Heavens secret tower although heā€™s started a set up will his female companions be more involved in it, will they ever know that he travels to different worlds and planes..? And last but not least will they all ever meet upā€¦.??

    Ch 459 Black Cat's Power
    Villainous Young Master's Otherworldly Harem
    Fantasy Ā· starry8sword
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  • Monty_Carlo
    Monty_Carlo1mth
    Replied to MiddleEastern

    This is 4yrs later but i do understand what you mean things like this the dynamics between emotions and intellect is never done properly. Because author could have labelled that although he has the memories and experiences of a past life but because heā€™s returned itā€™s forming a balancing act either heā€™s a young man demeanour beyond his age meaning heā€™ll still have those reckless emotions just when needed he can learn to act appropriately or just do what all such stories do and just make them act like kids whilst claiming they disdain this and that šŸ¤¦šŸ¾ā€ā™‚ļø. Honestly if anything it should bet a plot whole to then fill in with charater growth but when does that ever happen šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚

    Returning from the Immortal World
    Urban Ā· Jing Ye Ji Si
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  • Monty_Carlo
    Monty_Carlo2mth
    Posted

    Sorry even if iā€™m biased iā€™ve read many novels but this one is just personally for me tops them all especially if weā€™re talking about cultivation novels, itā€™s nice to have a competent MC, the harem is written well too (harems ainā€™t bad they just need to be written well, especially if the woman actually take part in the story and arenā€™t just flower vases after MC gets them) the world building just drags you in, even if thereā€™s info dump I actually want to read it and not skip it, although his cultivation is well behind but you canā€™t judge just based on that nonetheless i do await for whatā€™s it like when he catches up (iā€™m assuming heā€™ll sky rocket with his Mytsic ascenion šŸ‘€ dude has like 6 laws already soā€¦). If writer is seeing these messages i have a question as although it was mentioned his parents died but there corpses werenā€™t really found so does that mean theyā€™re still alive or is there a possibility that they are just curiousā€¦?

    Paragon of Sin
    Eastern Ā· KevinAscending
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  • Monty_Carlo
    Monty_Carlo3mth
    Replied to KeitoHasekura

    Iā€™d say the many issues with Harems isnā€™t the Harem trope itself but the way itā€™s written. The women tend to always become flower vases even when they was heavens blessed etc, pokemon go collect them all etc and it always ruins it. They all need to be in the story and not just part of it, stories are fantasy but if real life thinking is incorporated properly it works well. Take the save a hoe idea, the MC motive could be selfish, only for a benefit he wants not just a happy coincidence at least develop dialogue between the 2, natural flow of feelings i mean shit if you facing 10 different sect 8 different realms this and that immortal pointing your sword at the heavenly but stumped on tje dynamics between men and women like wtf šŸ™ƒšŸ™ƒ, or standing up for his women iā€™d rather the FMC whoop who ever ass needs whooping herself i mean sheā€™s a talented cultivator in her own right is well isnā€™t she. Or the classic separation, no form of communication whatsoever then you never see her till chapter 1000 or so only to be seperated again. Iā€™m sure like me you could predict the story, say example modern day cultivation stories its, beauty CEO, the assistant, some university chicks bffs + teach, policewoman, rival beauty CEO, some foreigner, hidden sect chicks, some arranged marriage chick from his kicked out of family the order could be same or different but itā€™s too predictable. Nonetheless iā€™ll be starting ā€œRomatic Cultivatorā€ and reviews look promising but i gotta read it myself first āœŒšŸ¾

    The Romantic Cultivator
    Eastern Ā· Avidfan
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  • Monty_Carlo
    Monty_Carlo6mth
    Posted

    Erm author-kun, i (hope) was wondering to will be relinquish his devil bloodline for a better one itā€™s to be honest nerfing him way too much with this holy light attributed attacks, itā€™s not tht its bad but itā€™s basically limiting, now maybe thereā€™s a purpose or story behind it but honestly iā€™d like a never seen before bloodline for the MC, or better yet merge and fuse different bloodlines to form his own new one, one that evolves with him as he gains strength. Just a thought tho nothing personal against the bloodline he has now just itā€™s limiting him we donā€™t see it much and yes thatā€™s what a trump card should be but itā€™s too easy in your face ā€œheā€™s a devil so use holy light attacksā€ šŸ¤” itā€™s almost plot armour to account for a loss.

    Villain: Manipulating the Heroines into hating the Protagonist
    Eastern Ā· Evil_Villain
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  • Monty_Carlo
    Monty_Carlo6mth
    Commented

    Question to author-kun, will fellow doaist Jun expand on Heaven secret town, when will it make waves to be known across the world and i hope it develops independently with no ties to anyone but Jun.

    Ch 260 Super Cloud
    Villainous Young Master's Otherworldly Harem
    Fantasy Ā· starry8sword
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  • Monty_Carlo
    Monty_Carlo6mth
    Posted

    Definitely enjoying the story so far, i do hope to see the girls brought together soon not out of necessity but itā€™s also just a due to happen. What about saki and his daughter how far off author-kun. + the demons invation is that still happeningā€¦?? And finally future wise heā€™s sure to leave Blue Star and venture to other realms. Ps.. will we get a cultivation realm world hop. Not to sure if author replies but just some questions.

    Villainous Young Master's Otherworldly Harem
    Fantasy Ā· starry8sword
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  • Monty_Carlo
    Monty_Carlo8mth
    Posted

    Author is doing wanders, this amusing as hell, although if thereā€™s anything author could look into (read up to 114) is MC manipulation tactics needs to be more broader he is a villain yes indeed but he should approach different heroines with different tactics because at the end of the day heā€™s doing something villainous by manipulating them but so far itā€™s seems the same all force, what about some slick tactics having them approach him instead after heā€™s spun his web of traps, or use already gotten heroines into manipulating others by proxy you know variety or a challenge into manipulating them without trying to inflict any negative emotions as a challenge. No Iā€™m not asking for a hero iā€™d like more intrigue not just she got big tits iā€™m tryna fu**. But donā€™t get me wrong author itā€™s definitely interesting till so far šŸ¤£šŸ¤£šŸ¤£šŸ¤£šŸ¤£šŸ¤£

    Villain: Manipulating the Heroines into hating the Protagonist
    Eastern Ā· Evil_Villain
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  • Monty_Carlo
    Monty_Carlo9mth
    Replied to Joao_Pires

    You my friend are a G.O.A.T šŸ™ŒšŸ¾ of the comments, i find it hard to keep up with the decreasing fate value of these favoured sons of heaven

    Ch 172 A Public Apology from Fang Yuan
    Great Villain: Starting by Humiliating the Son of the Heavenly Fate
    Eastern Ā· AlphaWIA
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  • Monty_Carlo
    Monty_Carlo9mth
    Commented

    Bruhh i know itā€™s how the story plays out Iā€™ve loved it, but in this instance even Iā€™m embarrassed for the guy. šŸ¤£šŸ¤£šŸ¤£šŸ¤£šŸ¤£ Anyways author Iā€™ve been left marvelled by what Iā€™ve been reading. Too entertaining

    Ch 157 The Protagonist Fang Yuan's Dilemma
    Great Villain: Starting by Humiliating the Son of the Heavenly Fate
    Eastern Ā· AlphaWIA
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  • Monty_Carlo
    Monty_Carlo9mth
    Posted

    Read up to ch.92 so far an all i can say up till thia point is fantastic. Well systems not been around but itā€™s ok. Peopleā€™s opinions on harems arenā€™t th best but if written well, where the story revolves around a good plot, just the write amount of snu-snu then it works. Of course up to where i am thereā€™s been no major action but itā€™s still so well written that Iā€™m still captivated.

    Villain: The Play of Destiny
    Fantasy Ā· FateDevilAce
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  • Monty_Carlo
    Monty_Carlo10mth
    Posted

    Definitely enjoyed the story so far, plots good so is the world building and just the right amount of snu-snu for the cultured, if thereā€™s on thing i could change or advise the author on its the round about way that he keeps repeating the same thing just in a different way almost seeming to just fill up more when thereā€™s no need. Plus as cultivation is the one thing that separates them from others (well so far for now Iā€™m assuming theyā€™re there just later on the story) iā€™d be happy to see it explored more.

    My Celestial Ascension
    Fantasy Ā· LittleBastard879
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  • Monty_Carlo
    Monty_Carlo1yr
    Posted

    Been reading and i must say Iā€™ve definitely enjoyed, the intricacies will keep you intrigued from chapter to chapter, although i do want to see more personal action from MC, and being a avid lover of swords myself seeing itā€™s also the weapon MC uses it definitely needs more screen time. Plus MC power realm needs to keep up itā€™s lagging to far behind iā€™m not asking for the typical 12chpts OP MC hardly, however to nerf him too much is a bitā€¦. Nonetheless itā€™s been fantastic so far

    Immortal Kingdoms
    Fantasy Ā· CasuallyPolite
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  • Monty_Carlo
    Monty_Carlo1yr
    Commented

    We all know itā€™ s coming, harems can be written right yaā€™ll know, keep the femaleā€™s interesting actually involved in the story other than you know what acts plus not useless be it stonger than the MC or like Bing Xue not fall so far behind but it works. Iā€˜m not saying he should have a couple 100 girls not at all but for those weā€™ve read care about and actually donā€™t mind why canā€™t they just be together.

    The two stayed silent for a minute or two until Bai Zemin opened his mouth and said slowly, "Yijun, if at some point in the future to come it turns out that I do accept having multiple partners and this does not discomfort my current partner then you will certainly be by my side...if you still love me, that is."
    Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy Ā· XIETIAN
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  • Monty_Carlo
    Monty_Carlo1yr
    Replied to ShadeeDiablo

    Not read very far but yes maybe heā€™ll add a harem tag which by all means make sense because unlike many other harems Bai Zeman isnā€™t collecting them all lile pokemon the 3 girls involved with him also arenā€™t some bimboā€™s but actually interesting, plus it would be such a buzzkill if at the end he denys them a relationship with MC when all readers can see it, basically not all Harems novels are bad if plot is good enough

    Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy Ā· XIETIAN
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  • Monty_Carlo
    Monty_Carlo1yr
    Replied to Monty_Carlo

    Hello šŸ˜, Iā€™v recently read up to 124 so Iā€™ve enjoyed the story so far, but like i said maybe iā€˜m judging to early and heā€™ll maybe have a character awakening, of course ā€œXiao Moā€ hasnā€™t appeared yet but iā€™m hoping on top of him making connections that heā€™s focused more on developing himself with connections on top, in system tropes terms itā€™s the equivalent of i have a system press a button but never try to comprehend the skills. Also asking will we get a more comprehensive view of sword law/intent?? (personal favourite weapon if i do say so myself)

    Transmigration: Children of The Plane
    Eastern Ā· slarbi123
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  • Monty_Carlo
    Monty_Carlo1yr
    Posted

    For now i think itā€™s going well, but MC needs to differentiate himself from the rest. If all heā€™ll do is befriend strong characters he himself seems useless. it should centre him and if he befriends or killā€™s the 5 plane children the itā€™s a bonus, all the 5 plane children happen to just make the story more interesting is what Iā€™m saying. Basically what iā€˜m saying is i read the story but MC still feels detached, so far his feminine looks seem like the best thing about him when actually his potential is just as great as if not better than the plane children, but i guess maybe Iā€™m judging to much heā€™s still 13 after all. Anyways I donā€™t know if Author seeā€™s these comments but Iā€™m definitely looking forward to his character development. āœŒšŸ¾āœŒšŸ¾

    Transmigration: Children of The Plane
    Eastern Ā· slarbi123
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