This book has great writing and a great story, and I think the overall setting and plot are fabulous, some things could use a touch of work, but besides that, I'd recommend this novel to whoever comes across it,

dang things escalated a little there, can't wait to see what happens next

Interesting story, the events were well described, and the MC's motives were pretty easy to understand, I also think the poetry in this novel is also well done! Definitely looking forward to more chapters and such.[img=update]

thanks for all the support!