Dimasadisaputra
Because i like your mother's
of reading
177
Read books
I don't know if I'm in the wrong genre or what, but I don't feel any tension here, everything feels relaxed and smooth
TFTC
TFTVC
Well, look, doesn't this seem like the characteristics of a Protagonist, hoo honestly if it stays like this, I feel like Sepuh is the real MC
Now I feel that Leon is a Protagonist
So Aur understands the concept of the Protagonist, that's good then, dear, Aur is the God of Muscles, so Holy Magic is impossible for him to have, maybe it's another magic
Poor MC
The beginning was, how should I say, a little cliche and strange? meh but good
Honestly, I'm horrified at the thought, at least make yourself more mature and have a little higher cultivation