Svr_Daoist
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Didn't want to complain on a free read, but after reading this far, there's a problem you might want to address before someone says you are using AI to write [I think you used AI]- The number of times you used the names of each character is just too many. In a single sentence you are using the name of the same character multiple times then again when a character is talking to another, they are using their names before the sentence, this is just absurd. Sudowrite, Jasper, GPT, or whatever AI you are using, isn't doing a great job. You better fix it before it gets worse. And don't argue with me, I put it under multiple AI checkers, guess what? 87%-92% AI generated. Sad, really sad. Next, you will delete this comment 100% I know it.