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  • Abhay_Kesharwani_3901
    Abhay_Kesharwani_39011mth
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    author , here Gu Lan in the last paragraphs his is inconsistently represented as from "" he/his to she/her""

    Ch 40 Not Admitting? Continue Exposing the Secret!
    My Wife Turns Out to be an Empress of the Dynasty
    Eastern · COL+ Zhen De Shui Bu Gou
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  • Abhay_Kesharwani_3901
    Abhay_Kesharwani_39011mth
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    INCONSISTENT GENDER

    Gu Lan silently felt the changes in her meridians, restrained her excitement, and then looked at the other rewards.
    My Wife Turns Out to be an Empress of the Dynasty
    Eastern · COL+ Zhen De Shui Bu Gou
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  • Abhay_Kesharwani_3901
    Abhay_Kesharwani_39011mth
    Replied to Ozonelayer

    then is she a girlfish

    Atlantean| Cordelia
    Elven Legacy
    Fantasy · Ozonelayer
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  • Abhay_Kesharwani_3901
    Abhay_Kesharwani_39011mth
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    inconsistent gender - sometimes as he then other times as her

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    My Divine Summoner System
    Fantasy · Charo_jorgen
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  • Abhay_Kesharwani_3901
    Abhay_Kesharwani_39011mth
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    very thoughtful of author to start this book story very thankful to you (author) for your sharing your patriotic ideas with here .... and if possible, I would like to suggest that under any circumstances please do not separate the religious communities of India , DO NOT ISOLATE ANY RELIGION OF INDIA & LET BE **"" HINDU , MUSLIM ,SIKH AND ISAHI(CHRISTIAN) BE BHAI - BHAI ""**

    Ch 1 Prologue
    India: I became the First PM of India
    History · FanficWorld07
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  • Abhay_Kesharwani_3901
    Abhay_Kesharwani_39011mth
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    defeated × killed ✓ AT THE AGE OF 16

    So far, Lin Rui has defeated six gangsters in this dark lane and the completion of the main line quest has increased a little. While Lin Rui was standing there taking a little rest, there was a sound of footsteps in the street beside him.
    Heroes Of Marvel Reupload....
    Movies · DarkShadow95
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  • Abhay_Kesharwani_3901
    Abhay_Kesharwani_39011mth
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    there is no such thing as as 12 o' clock in the evening even if this is fiction

    Near 12 o'clock in the evening, Lin Rui was lying in bed quietly. Tom, Harry, Gwen, and Peter have long left, and his parents have fallen asleep next door. His birthday was perfect. However, there has been little progress in what Lin Rui has been planning.
    Heroes Of Marvel Reupload....
    Movies · DarkShadow95
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  • Abhay_Kesharwani_3901
    Abhay_Kesharwani_39011mth
    Commented

    gender inconsistent

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    Beast Tamer : Start With Fire Dog
    Fantasy · Snorlax777
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  • Abhay_Kesharwani_3901
    Abhay_Kesharwani_39011mth
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    thnx for magnificent illustrations

    Fortunately she can making a living as an E-level Beast Tamer with her Spirit Beast: a Furhound and a Dovestruk.
    Beast Tamer : Start With Fire Dog
    Fantasy · Snorlax777
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  • Abhay_Kesharwani_3901
    Abhay_Kesharwani_39014mth
    Commented

    author 😱 ,who gutted you ??????

    Ch 163 Chapter 160: The Extremely Generous Monkey King (Asking for Monthly Tickets)
    Journey to the West: I have Nine Golden Crows Inside Me
    Eastern · Poor Slacker
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  • Abhay_Kesharwani_3901
    Abhay_Kesharwani_39014mth
    Commented

    thanks for the update ☺️as a newbie , from my pov this story is the Chinese deal

    Ch 116 Chapter 114: Merit Gold Wheel
    Journey to the West: I have Nine Golden Crows Inside Me
    Eastern · Poor Slacker
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  • Abhay_Kesharwani_3901
    Abhay_Kesharwani_39015mth
    Commented

    And he is 11 years old

    Ch 5 Healing and Alchemy
    Harry Potter: An Exception Side Character
    Book&Literature · Soulderean
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  • Abhay_Kesharwani_3901
    Abhay_Kesharwani_39019mth
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    wait a minute , the book "Be a good master and cultivate" mentioned in this chapter was also mentioned in the first chapters that he found it in mystic realm a year ago and now, after accepting disciples he found it again in this mystic realm . THAT DOESN'T MAKE ANY SENSE

    Ch 21 Unknown Dangers
    Be a Good Master and Cultivate!
    Eastern · Shateralyn
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  • Abhay_Kesharwani_3901
    Abhay_Kesharwani_39011yr
    Commented

    There are many places in the chapter where the protagonist is addressed as her, please change the denomination of the protagonist as it confuses the reader. Thanks !!! for the story 😁

    Ch 2 Time Traveler Josh
    Marvel Plane Trader
    Anime & Comics · FicNovels
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  • Abhay_Kesharwani_3901
    Abhay_Kesharwani_39011yr
    Commented

    +1

    This book has been deleted.