I enjoyed the way the author divided magic into levels and tied everything together they did a good job with it and it's been a enjoyable read so far

the author has done a good job developing a suspenseful situation leaving us to wonder which way they are going to take us with it I just wish they would giving us spoilers and leave it suspenseful

the author has done a good job with the storyline and don't overdo things with the system and give to much information about it the characters thoughts and emotions are very relatable I find it to be a very enjoyable read and will recommend to any one who enjoys reading this type of noval

wow so much criticism for a new author just starting out instead of words of criticism you people should encourage them and gently tell them where and how they could do better not being so rude about it

it is a good read fast paced interesting character's nice

I find it to be a good read and I am enjoying it [img=update]

it's well written the characters are creditable and easy to identify with in certain situations the emotional quality of the characters are quite believable and it's easy to read