who is the love interest is it Wanda? mc is sokovian. loved your modern family fic so hope this fanfic will be an improved version of your previous fc both in writing, world-building, and character development. I am stacking chapters so I haven't read anything so not to disturb rating I am not writing a review this early. hope you stay motivated and enjoy writing this novel, bro.

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keep up the good work bro, this book is a high-quality experience for any reader, you have used many experiences from real life like Karl max class struggle, the art of war book strategies, etc it is really good to see that author has did research about various things and implemented it in his book, this really gives more depth to the character as they actually imitate someone in real life, it makes them more 3D character than an simple 2D being who just have single emotion expressing capability and unexplained motivations. Note: my view is based on what this story implies but I have to say one piece is a world that has themes of friendship and freedom with exciting fights and so much slice of life, but this novel is more like organization building, freedom (more mature take and based with real historical ideas implemented) and bit educational as many of things used in it are based on real history I think. so I can firmly say this novel is well written and is a bit historical and mature, but if you are expecting a regular one piece fanfiction with MC who wants harem, gets overpowered throw world government with his own strength or with team mates or wishfulfilment and war after war and just killing then this novel is not for you. this is my perspective and view so feel free to express any thoughts you have. and author/Translator keep up the good work bro it was a pleasant experience to read this novel.

keep up the good work bro, this book is a high-quality experience for any reader, you have used many experiences from real life like Karl max class struggle, the art of war book strategies, etc it is really good to see that author has did research about various things and implemented it in his book, this really gives more depth to the character as they actually imitate someone in real life, it makes them more 3D character than an simple 2D being who just have single emotion expressing capability and unexplained motivations.

bro you are saying whole time without knowing everything you cannot judge anything, so that history is important, if you know yourself and your enemy then you need not to be afraid of hundred battles -Sun tzu so author plz fabricate some story about what may have roger seen at laugh tale , do not avoid it by making your charcter saying,"i do not care about secret at laugh tale". and author unptil now story is really good , and if this is an translation then translator bro this translation is reallly good , keeep the good work.

this is one of the best translation i have read for and one piece fanfic if is it as from title at first i thought it was just an mtl with good concept and came here to read with non existent expectation but this fanfic has just blown my mind its really good in comparison to many one piece novels and fiction i have read. 1)It has unique story , really i did not expected it i thought just like many similar fictions in this novel to author will just SI his character go with original flow and just make his mc perform better than luffy and other ogc and will make people feel how superior is he . they after arc complition nothing will change in acutal story even after mc interuption but god i was so wrong , here character progress is actually good and original characters reatain there personality which is good to see. 2)i do not know if is it a translation or an new author just took concept from mtl sites and wrote his own fiction ,so please sorry if i did not gave credits to correct person ,so i will just say kudos to translator or author both for this fic really enjoyed it. keep writing/translating more fics in future.

Keep it on

Just give smart or manupilative mc who use brain no need to be ruthless