Holly molly...Nice one. Read 3 chapters for now. Gtg to sleep. But can't wait to continue. The ideas, as you said, though inspired from somewhere, you did manage to make them yours. The death and action concept .... nice. You do have talent.

The reading was pleasant, quite well built and justified (in regard to the characters, but... I am more into SF and action type of novels. But I do understand some like feelings and ... love to read about. It's just my personal opinion...sorry.. :)