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zieem_azam1yrCommentedso you asked me for thoughts on every chapter so here we are I saw 2 main mistakes and maybe 2 ambiguous remarks while still a cut above your average cultivation novel this may break the immersion also having the authors note so long will inadvertently cause readers to get confused but if you perhaps put some form of border around the footnote then they shall know what to skip if your maniacal thoughts do not interest them
Ch 49 Chapter no.49 The Consequences- zieem_azam1yrReplied to Adamo_Amet
what does it mean to be truly fair or unfair anyway it's all about perspective and if it's all about perspective then can be no unanimous decision on what is fair or not
On that day, I came to understand that lamenting and bemoaning the unfairness of the world would not alter its nature. I comprehended that life was perpetually unjust, from those who had suffered and perished to those who had been wronged and injured. I contemplated the individuals who were forced to subsist in a world that was not just, but what could we do in such a world? - zieem_azam1yrCommentedCh 47 Chapter no.47 Calm before the storm
- zieem_azam1yrReplied to Adamo_AmetCh 45 Chapter no.45 A Sense of Freedom
- zieem_azam1yrCommentedCh 45 Chapter no.45 A Sense of Freedom