checked the First 4 chapters and impressed. Hope you can finish editing so that I can check out the rest of the content on other chapters. Thanks for the work,

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thanks for chapter

Is she dead already?

ooh chance to become a bandit?

operating in reality

PTSt

big mouth

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I like the way your new work is trying to go in a whole new direction and all, after it is tiring to always read about some unlucky guy trying to get revenge for being rejected by a girl. "Boy! Ain't got no manners..." How many people get rejected daily and it does not be come the highlight of their life. Keep that up, but if the story starts developing such symptoms, I'm bailing

like where this is going

where are we goin?