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Haha, it has been nice talking to you. I look forward to any other perspectives you have while reading, so don't be shy about commenting.
That's a valid point. My view on it was that Yune had done a few small experiments while at Alvin's training room, using a different amount of mana each time to decrease his weight. Using that, combined with having gotten a sort of natural feeling for it after having used his powers a few times, Yune could roughly estimate his weight reduction. (P.S. this was also an estimation for Yune. His so called weight reduction of "around 3%" could have also roughly been 2% to 5% haha) But thank you for the comment, it was fun for me to think about this again as I didn't really have an immediate answer to it.
Not at all. I am a new writer, so I appreciate every bit of feedback.
Thank you very much for the feedback. I have changed it in all the chapters and will make sure to use the right one going forward.
I am not planning on it being one.
Well, I suppose they wasted all the money on the delicious food they prepare for the top students.
Thank you very much for your comments. I have made sure to correct the mistakes you mentioned.