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just to let you know in writing its best not to do this when we can tell he's confused by saying what's going on there is no need for lines like this you have done it a few times with stuff like ''I said'' when we can tell who is saying it there is no need this is only a suggestion you do not have to follow it
great so far but I would recommend not releasing a chapter as big as this and dividing it up into a few more chapters most people will click on it and likely not read it because it only has one chapter and they dont want to read something only for it to stop releasing chapters after the first one I would hate to see this flop after being this good
I enjoy reading it you do not need to thank me I don't have a lot of free time on my hands so I just started reading this chapter