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  • Daoist7bnEpR
    Daoist7bnEpR5mth
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    the seven deadly sins.Eskanor-the grace of the sun

    Ch -6 Template / System? / Gacha?
    Riser Phenex? DXD SI. Multicross?
    Anime & Comics · Kaioshin
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  • Daoist7bnEpR
    Daoist7bnEpR7mth
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    thanks

    Ch -1 Power Levels
    A Faker's Will (Highschool dxd X Bleach fanfic)
    Anime & Comics · Clygg0
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  • Daoist7bnEpR
    Daoist7bnEpR7mth
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    will there be a romantic interest, if so, to whom?(English is not my native language)

    Ch -1 Power Levels
    A Faker's Will (Highschool dxd X Bleach fanfic)
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    Daoist7bnEpR7mth
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    Ch 9 Capitulo 9: Lo siento, pero no puedo
    Gojo y el infinito multiverso
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  • Daoist7bnEpR
    Daoist7bnEpR8mth
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    To begin with, this is one of the best fanfiction on mha.The quality of the letter is at a very good level, the chapters are long and prescribed.Sometimes there is a narrative not from the main character, it allows you to open up better, other characters.Dialogue and transition between personalities are good (not the same as pov1, pov2, pov3 and very disgusting transitions).The character and his personality are well revealed.This is the first time I've seen the "reverse quirk", and the idea is quite interesting, but I see that our main character should be stronger if you look at the soundboard and how quickly he achieved it, or is it just the STRENGTH of the MAIN CHARACTER (I think you understand what I mean).I really liked the story and the concept.The hero of the recipe has a childhood (if you can call it that, of course) which is extremely rare for him. they don 't spend much time . Keep it up.(English is not my native language, so if you notice mistakes, please don't throw your slippers)

    My Hero Academia Reborn: World 63
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  • Daoist7bnEpR
    Daoist7bnEpR8mth
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    I would prefer Shihon Yorichi, but it's still your choice.I like the grace and beauty of this character.They will also be plus or minus the same age.(English is not my native language)

    Ch -2 Vote
    Life In Bleach: Reborn as Xebec
    Anime & Comics · Void_Man24
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  • Daoist7bnEpR
    Daoist7bnEpR8mth
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    no harem.Sometimes it's better if you write a story without a harem, I rarely see a dhd without it

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  • Daoist7bnEpR
    Daoist7bnEpR9mth
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    the idea itself is not bad.But how you develop it will be important.Will hacks work for phoenix or not, because the limit of hacks is almost limitless (English is not my native language)

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  • Daoist7bnEpR
    Daoist7bnEpR11mth
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    the story is developing quite well.at the time of chapter 11, I have no claims.the idea is not new, but I rarely see a character fall into the time of Minato.(English is not my native native language)

    Why am I here?(Rewrite)
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  • Daoist7bnEpR
    Daoist7bnEpR1yr
    Commented

    I think no, I think hinato will be better, but you can make a list in the next chapter from which readers can choose the best option

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: Class 7
    Naruto: I Am Whitebeard!
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