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Narciss849dCommentedCh 793 Chapter â 786 The Secrets of the Caged Bird- Narciss843mthReplied to Questi0nMa7k
Bruv im sorry but I donât think Iâll be able to post that mass release, im working on a project and on top of that my laptop keeps switching off.
"Clan head, the leading clan of the town has asked for permission to enter; the Lindhou clan is here." At those words, Haru got up. "It's time to face the music. Invite them in." The maid bowed and ran out. - Narciss844mthReplied to Romance_guy
Okay Iâm back home so Iâll start working on the fic again
"Clan head, the leading clan of the town has asked for permission to enter; the Lindhou clan is here." At those words, Haru got up. "It's time to face the music. Invite them in." The maid bowed and ran out. - Narciss844mthReplied to
I havenât been as free as I thought I would be this December đ its been hectic but imma release maybe on the 4th coz I ainât gonna be around my laptop for a few days
"Clan head, the leading clan of the town has asked for permission to enter; the Lindhou clan is here." At those words, Haru got up. "It's time to face the music. Invite them in." The maid bowed and ran out. - Narciss844mthCommentedCh 217 Notice
- Narciss844mthReplied to Romance_guy
Sheâs a jinchuruchi
"Clan head, the leading clan of the town has asked for permission to enter; the Lindhou clan is here." At those words, Haru got up. "It's time to face the music. Invite them in." The maid bowed and ran out. - Narciss844mthReplied to alexbabyyahoo
the problem is that I didn't plan out a lot of in depth world building for the lower thousand world that the setting currently is in
[I have like Zero patience so im moving the story along as fast as possible because I want them to join a kingdom and then leave the lower thousand world ASAP coz its boring in terms of cultivation, pls give me powerstones and collections. Have a good day] - Narciss844mthReplied to Claudian_D_AmazonCh 6 Mon
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maybe, I was thinking the senju would be an ally of the uzumaki in a higher thousand world. I do however need to diversify the abilities of the children of the clan before I do the timeskip so again, maybe
"Clan head, the leading clan of the town has asked for permission to enter; the Lindhou clan is here." At those words, Haru got up. "It's time to face the music. Invite them in." The maid bowed and ran out. - Narciss845mthReplied to AviZ_Ch 2 Shen clan-Uzumaki clan part 1
- Narciss846mthPosted
Absolutely love it, amazing story but I will talk about the issues as a critic should.1. the characters around mc sometimes feel like they have been dumbed down to make him look smarter2.Akatsuki members are being recruited while ignoring all the bad shit they have done to warrant the recruitment as a 'good decision'3.mc ain't got no ho*es and so on. however the quality of the story itself overshadows all of that honestly so cudos to you
- Narciss846mthPosted
every fic of yours has a couple people criticising it needlessly, wagwan?So far its pretty good, the subjugation of the gang seemed to be a spur of the moment decision that have no purpose and would likely damage his image. The fact that a woman with good morals and had a following in the gang seemed a tad bit too practical when I read it but what do I know, I haven't gotten far anyway, anyway good luck and don't drop
- Narciss847mthReplied to Dylan_Berneman
yeah
Anyway we are members of the Shedzu race. I am a white shedzu and zack is a black shedzu. we are creations of the god Nyxar and the goddess Kaguya. we are from another omniverse where the gods are supreme. Our creator aims to create a new pantheon and while i dont know why he knows you, he wants you to join his pantheon as for why you cant sense my emotions. we were created with the ability to avoid all detection. - Narciss847mthReplied to Einlion
- Narciss847mthReplied to ShatteredMusicCh 12 journey of avatars 2
- Narciss847mthReplied to cabooseiscool_1
technicaly it depends on various factors however, I was trying to set Kauz and Rafi as generals and Fujitora as a commander of the CP0 alone
One of the two masked men in front of her responded, their features hidden entirely behind their masks, with no visible openings for sight or breath. "We are CP0, an elite unit that operates under Admiral Fujitora. We are here to invite you to the tower, as per Archbishop Clementine's order." - Narciss848mthReplied to Growl_16
I am so confused rn
Anyway we are members of the Shedzu race. I am a white shedzu and zack is a black shedzu. we are creations of the god Nyxar and the goddess Kaguya. we are from another omniverse where the gods are supreme. Our creator aims to create a new pantheon and while i dont know why he knows you, he wants you to join his pantheon as for why you cant sense my emotions. we were created with the ability to avoid all detection. - Narciss848mthReplied to pervy_sloth