Author needs to reread and correct odd errors like strange I s before commas or at the end of sentences. Also numbers in words instead of the correct letters.

somewhere you missed the word eye on a sentence. The meaning remained but it was an obvious missing space.

ok you meant debt not dept. that you used every time.

win == wind

The paragraph where he felt his mana drained, you wrote soldier ants and meant soldier wasps. Otherwise better than other stories I have read about this place.

There has been enough time and space since you wrote this. Re-read this chapter. Your software replaced words with similar sounding words with different meanings. Typical error when you write by speaking instead of writing or in a non-english language then changed into English by a translation software. Minor errors.

Am I the only one who remembered and confirmed that you killed off Lili in chapter 19? No matter Dragon V has been evolved to a point that the poor Drake is in a box with few exits. As the only Dragon he could have been a champion of those in need of one and a great source of wisdom. Those helped would be a new kind of treasured hoard. As is the only end is a quest to kill off this hazard.

Last two chapters could have shone ML as an ambassador solving an ongoing problem planet. Then the novel would end. Then start a book two of the series or narrate from a different student's POV or alien's. Big weakness of this app is encouraging never ending stories.

Yes, long. On the shorter end, the chapter is for simple children. Read a couple of chapters same world type, but reads like a child's bedtime story. it has a place but it would cheepen your current story.

Ok, first chapter to have multiple misspellings and or correctly spelled words that sound the same as intended but aren't the correct word for the intended meaning. Auto correct errors in this fashion. When I had to proof scientific papers, they taught us to read the chapter backwards from end to beginning. Errors like this stand out. Otherwise good concept and approach.