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Good chapter , but you have a repeat paragraph nearby the top
Great chapter. Glad to see character development.
Looks like some great things are ahead. Just saw one typo. You have invention . I think you’re looking for demon invasion
You have a couple paragraphs that are repeating themselves. Keep up the good work
Hey great chapter. Really enjoying the development of the story. Just wanted to let you know that you repeated the same paragraph twice. Keep up the good work [img=update]
Hopping to get a lily chapter back home. We enjoy seeing her pov when she tells her parents
Really good chapter.
Appreciate you adding more chapters
Keep on the good job
Great chapter
Really good glad chapters [img=update]
Can’t wait for the chapters
Excellent chapter . Enjoyed that trick play
This was such a great chapter
Such a great chapter . Keep up the good work.
This book keeps getting better every chapter. I hope youll drop more than 2 chapters eventually . Keep up the good work
Keeps getting more interesting
Really good chapter
Another great chapter .
Over all a really great read. Like the richness of charactes. And how it keeps you intrigued to continue forward