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Please I think when writing the story, it's good to tell us what is happening in the city too. By that I mean Derbie, Kathy, Marvels, Alexâs family and his businesses. Concentrating the rest of the story on Alex and his eagerness on becoming god at a certain point makes it boring because the outcome of most of his battles will be known.
The story line is not making sense anymore. Debbie, Cathy, Lindsey, the detective just disappeared from the story line without any reasoning. Then Alex just leaves his city life to become a god. I donâ t see the futu in it without talking about his city and love life too