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  • Kenjo22
    Kenjo221mth
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    Good to see BB !! I think that it wasn't necessary to bring Gudako in the story since Nicholas is already more than ready for the singularity and there's a risk of character bloat with all the servant. She is more or less a deadweight and her interactions with the cast will be less interesting since she isn't the MC Still, excited for the next chapter !!

    Ch 63 Your Beloved Kouhai
    Fate/Fisted
    Anime & Comics · Bleap
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  • Kenjo22
    Kenjo225mth
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    ...I don't understand this fic...the writing IS good, really good even and the premice is engaging...yet I feel there's no ambition in it. Why put a system which allow you to change history if there's no use of such feature? It'll not affect the World negatively since the change would be in the past so the Counter Force won't try to kill the MC. Why does MC try so hard to not change things ? Or rather why won't you let him change things ? You have almost limitless possibilities of interaction with Heroic spirits, forge friendship, create legends and you do NOTHING with it!!! The way Nero and Tamamo lived and died was way different than what was recorded and I don't understand how hiding the truth won't allow the Beast to manifest. Why does he not take Gae Bolg ? Again the system allow retroactive change and Gae Bolg was the spear which took the lives of the best friend and the son of Cu chulainn. Taking it for himself would have resolved everything. Why does he gives Cu the very reason why Connla will be killed ? Why does he try not to change the destiny of Ferdiad and decide to go (and seemingly lose on purpose) in the war ? Why does thé first thing he think about Fergus is his sword ? MC was shown to be a pretty nice and compassionate guy so why is he so dismissive of what will happen to Fergus ?Why does he gives lecture about love and relationship with only one person to Medb when he wants (and have) a harem ? Why do he have like nearly 200hundreds years worth of life and experiences yet sounds and act so immature? Wasn't all this drama made for character development ? So why do I feel like he change of personality every chapter that comes out ? I don't know what's your plan with the rest of your fic but I hope it'll get better because I like reading it. I feel like...by not considering your MC as one you impede the progress and improvement that can be made and thus it lead to a meh-story even so it could be an awesome one Best of Luck for you in your endeavour and I hope you have a great week

    Ch 51 Chapter 50: Warmongering Queen
    Fate/Roulette
    Anime & Comics · J_Titan
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