im still in chapter 7 but i love the game-like writing you use, and the world-building is amazing. but to be honest, the first chapter is too long and it is kinda challenging to invest in the story once you get to the 3/4 chapter its an enjoyable story.

that cool idea to make a format like RPG, maybe I used use that too

great lore and world building for the first chapter, but the opening is quite so long

thank you for the feedback