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TheAuthorKami7dCommentedI never quite understood why I would need to look for an animal with intelligence to procreate. He is literally the God of nature and he has a twin sister who possesses the mastery of motherhood. Nature: Life. Motherhood: Life. With his dominance, I imagine that if he explores his powers further he can even change the genetics of some animals to create new ones.
My observation showed that the intelligence of the bears was a lot better than the tigers, the latter couldn't handle more complex communication but was capable of simple communication while the tigers simply don't communicate much until it's time to hunt.- TheAuthorKami8dCommented
He just said there are no predators, now he’s contradict himself.
Slithering through the undergrowth, snakes of various sizes and patterns moved with sinuous grace. Their streamlined bodies allowed them to traverse the domain silently, while their forked tongues tasted the air, sensing the world around them. They played an integral role in maintaining the delicate balance of the ecosystem, keeping populations of smaller creatures in check. - TheAuthorKami8dCommented
What balance? That is clearly not balance.
There is a pristine source of water nourishing the vegetation and serving as a lifeline for the creatures that called this place home. One notable aspect of my domain was the least amount of predatory animals allowing a diverse array of non predatory animals to thrive without the constant threat of predation. This created an atmosphere of tranquillity and allowed for a unique balance within the ecosystem. - TheAuthorKami8dCommented
Why would the gods go to war? They were created to be guardians, not to fight among themselves like mad dogs.
If this is as i thought then choosing a land and starting my own creation and its development should be put first above everything else. It seems this meeting is more than Crepuscular's own wish, Nana must be behind it. - TheAuthorKami8dCommented
Why is she her twin? It would make more sense if the goddess of death or the god of the sea were. Both are part of nature.
The last god being the one that I have communicated with and was supposedly my twin, she is the goddess of the moon and motherhood. She is the one that looks more human out of us all,Her long silver hair cascades gracefully down to her feet, adding an ethereal touch to her countenance. Her skin possesses a shimmering quality, akin to the twinkling stars in the night sky, reflecting the cosmic essence she embodies. - TheAuthorKami12dCommented
Did he hit him just because the guy asked him to shut up?
Hearing Genji's insult, the soldier opened his tired eyes and turned to face Genji and just before he could say anything, he saw a fist in front of his face. - TheAuthorKami12dCommented
From the first moment he spoke I knew he was an idiot, but I never believed that the author would make him even more of an idiot.
All the while Genji was still thinking. - TheAuthorKami12dPosted
If I'm honest, the dialogues and narrative of this story have a lot of room for improvement. It is quite noticeable that this novel was written by a novice writer. Another VERY critical point is the rate of updates. It would be great if it were updated at least twice a week, otherwise with the random chapter updates I highly doubt that a new reader will stay to read this novel no matter how much they like it. My recommendation for the author is to read books on how to create a good character, a good narrative, and dialogue that you find useful.
- TheAuthorKami1mthCommented
Why he always shrug your shoulders? Just do a less repetitive action, man.
"Well then take it personally." God shrugged as he took another sip of his steaming tea. - TheAuthorKami2mthCommented
How come he are described as an intelligent person when at times like these he sound like a brainless fool?
If he managed to obtain higher-level rights, he would be able to sell the elixirs he got for a discounted price to make a fortune. - TheAuthorKami2mthCommentedCh 29 Emperor Ming Seeks Help
- TheAuthorKami4mthCommented
Chinese Mc with a brain that doesn't think about busty women???!?!!?!?
He was still at school, and it would not be convenient for him to try out whatever this was. - TheAuthorKami4mthCommented
Why his reaction so calm? She literally just died.
'Oh, it just activated then, huh. Guess I will wait for a bit.' - TheAuthorKami4mthCommented
Please stop breaking the 4 wall by giving random details that are unnecessary to the story. They distract the reader and become annoying.
"Hiash, I'm going to be worked to death… For a job that doesn't give me any pay, or any retirement plan. I'm going to get worked to death, ah?" Hehe, dear reader please do forgive Di Tou, this could be considered one of the greater traumas of his generation. With job security going down, and greater and greater difficulties with social mobility, many people find it difficult to be in a financially stable situation by the time they're 60 or 70, and end up having to work up into their old ages. Unfortunately, most jobs nowadays will also try to cycle out the old workers for younger ones, as they can start the pay lower and reduce the likelihood of higher retirement packages. Of course, this is often a rather short sighted decision, as an old hand is still an old hand. Someone who's been working at the industry for a couple of decades is often times able to do the work of three or four fresh hires, but that's a problem for another day. These older individuals would often find it difficult to find new jobs at their age, and could only find work as street sweepers, custodians, and such and are stuck working a laborious job into their old age. - TheAuthorKami5mthPosted
In conclusion, this novel would do wonders if it had a beta reader and a qualified editor. The protagonist's personality is horrible, not because he is a villain, but because it is so poorly written and planned that it simply makes him awful. There are many VERY visible plot holes in this story that the author ignores. The characters don't feel realistic and the Mc says so much unnecessary or cringe-inducing dialogue that I just want to kick him. (rewritten review)
- TheAuthorKami5mthCommented
What kind of teacher must he have had to make such a logical assumption seem brilliant? Poor Kai:(
[That is.... absolutely correct.] If Kai had eyes, it would have blinked multiple times. [You're the smartest master I had in my millions of years here.] - TheAuthorKami5mthCommented
I mean, I think Decker still has his uses.
As for who was going to become his first target for heart and blood, it will Decker. - TheAuthorKami5mthCommented
Why this unnecessary monologue? It's boring and cringey.
"And this is also the reason you lose to me. I never lost hope, even when I felt like death was the right and easy end to my suffering. I just never stop thinking and grab any straw that can help me float in that despair, and now I'm sitting here without a parasite gem while you're kneeling just like me at the same spot with a parasite gem." - TheAuthorKami7mthCommented
For people who are curious if it is possible for a baby to walk at that age, I met a baby who was walking since he was 7 months old.
"Ah, you don't know yet. Well, would you like to come and see?" Alice put down the bowl of porridge and gestured at him to follow, which he did out of curiosity. - TheAuthorKami7mthCommented
At least he recognizes that his decision is extremely stupid. Other protagonists don't even do it.
It was the most logical choice, the obvious path to survival. After all, he was not an awakener, and his relationship with these individuals was tenuous at best. Yet, another question wormed its way into his mind: how would he feel waking up the next day, leaving behind the person who had saved his life to face certain death?