Apotheosis towards Paradox and Ruins

Keep Yang Kai alive but I don’t like how the Mc just giving him resources like a licking dog, thus gonna hold back the Mc. When the inheritance caves opens while Mc and Su Yan gets the true inheritance, create a new inheritance for Yang Kai to get so Mc could advance possibly ascend first without having to worry about his brother

That would be great just keep the MCs relationships the same as this book with them have god children before human era and demigod children whixh they place in adoption as babies a year or two before Percy is born. (Hera and Hestia being motherly would probs created human clones to adopt them ) Just need to adjust the MCs power level they is no need for that Omniversal strength and no dimension traveling. Mc would just be strong enough to defeat Kronos easily and make Zeus submit.

Just a brief summary in the next chapter, don’t need to dedicate the entire chapter to it

Let Mc and wives have some kids who are demigods and send them to the Percy Jackson universe to follow the timeline and train since humans aren’t developed in their world. Mc and wives would make an appearance and leave on of their god children or avatars to look after them

When is this masterpiece gonna continue???? Hopefully you can drop that God and dimensions travel ability talk because the story doesn’t really call for it. It can just be a slice of life book all the way to Legacies

Mc is not serious and hasn’t fully adapted/accepted who he is. He’s an upgraded original Hybrid which has nothing to do with Klaus, the better backstory would have been to say that he was created by nature and he needed to stop Lucian

Yes!!!!!! Author-San is redoing those hot mess of chapters. Let him give Allison the choice of being bitten and not attacking her like before

Let Padme be pregnant and give birth on Earth

Anakin Skywalker & Padme along with R2-D2 and C-3PO

I’m cringing so bad from reading his interaction with Hayley who he just met, I’m that straight up assault. Doesn’t give any proper plot just worlds thrown together to match a wanted desire. So bad that I’m struggling to continue reading the chapter after he saves Hayley

Bro that could have been handled way better, now it feels like you’re trying to force some drama into the story. Should have explained to her the backstory of her family and then offer her the bite with something along those lines. Now you’re just tear Allison away from you and bring more drama between the argents that never existed with the MC and no way this is gonna be forgivable within season 1. My advise is that unless you have a clear understanding of what you’re trying to do with the story is to rewrite the ending of this chapter. Really don’t wanna lose a good book

Options for betas: Stiles, Danny,Greenburgh(gotta admit it would be funny😂) and probs create 2 OCs to join the pack. If Allison is gonna be a Luna then she should probs be bitten. Mc giving her the choice around the time he tells her about her family and the supernatural, which is between episodes before Kate dies. Not wanting the relationship to be ruined the Scott’s from the show, her tells her everything including about killing her aunt. Just my thoughts but overall great chapters !!!!!

More……. please!!!!!!! Everything going perfect so far, please continue with the chapter lengths

Why flex your money so stupidly. The clubs selling price was just over 11 million and could have taken the offer as 20 million there was no need to raise it to 30 million. In the future please reframe from spending more than the actual cost. It feels like I’m reading an arrogant Chinese novel.

Just why????? It was good until Mc started licking Yang Kai and taking him as a disciple. The story was moving too fast and now forcibly slowing down the story by trying to implement new plots that makes no sense😐 Why would you transmigrate to a world where you’re supposed to be the only reincarnator just to have it open to the public on earth where soon worlds would be merged It’s really pathetic and should be left for a new story. Mc should have already moved back to the upper realm and not continue to waste time in the lower realm dog licking Yang Kai.

The earlier chapters were a bit confusing with being targeted by Triard and wanted by the entire supernatural community. Becomes understandable as the story progresses, really hope you continue updating the story I wanna see what he does with Ester and Rebecca and if Freya would give in to her thoughts

Yup if he wasn’t the MC with plot armor he would be dead already

No wonder this was dropped. Some of those wishes he could have done by himself just wasting a whole wish. Didn’t even wished about your weakness.