The beginning of this novel was extremely strong. Part one just finished and last 20-30 chapters really dragged down the overall story quality for me. Felt rushed, plots holes and seems like characters completely swapped up who they were or died with little to no explanation or reasoning. Hope the next part does a better job with these things and doesn’t continue down this same path. Really feel part one could of been better, but honestly this novel is one of the better ones on this site still.

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True fear. Being left with only John.

Rizz master Edward and Nihil. The tag team no one knew they needed. True wingman.

Nice

I’m honestly surprised the chapter didn’t end with his brother immediately messaging him about having a girlfriend haha 😂 His brother loves gossip after all. Thanks for the chapter!

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Bro he gave Jayden his wing and a way to escape and still got left behind. Man better have a realization that Jayden and others aren’t guarenteed to help him no matter what he does at this point.

Brother is an L machine

Thanks for the chap 😌

Congratulations! And keep on writing! Look forward to catching up and reading more.

See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle

Just a little shaken up , don’t worry

Classic. Professor better look for a new job 😂

Hello 👋 hope you’ve been well. I’m catching up soon haha

I feel like this isn’t part of the test but hey, good experience 😂

Poor kid :(

I kinda just want them together. So pure

Ty for the chapter!!