I guess it should be a merging or "the great merging" for extrapolation.

yeah, "the comments" here is kind of vague. I'd be better if "common sense/common perspective" is used instead. If I have to put it into words: "...scared because it was too risky from common perspective..."

The character typed those words, not the author. So, we could throw the blame to the character for their lack of writing words.

This one could be urban-tier, besides primitive-tier and antiquarian-tier I proposed for mid-tier, as the naming with shared resemblance to age of humanity.

to make it less confusing combined with sub-tier and to accompany the primitive-tier naming, this tier could be named antiquarian-tier.

thanks for your hardwork.

or the sub-tier could be tame, feral, hostile. Tame means it is tame compared to the similar tier, feral means it is still on tolerable level among them, and hostile means it has a highest danger of them.

I think it is better to change unranked into harmless tier, except there is more to tell about this tier as the story progresses.

He had nothing

I also like the author writing style but the flow of the story feels forced.

even the affinity thing fits the academy instead of the guild because hunting monster and such quests require practical skills than mere affinity.

Then, this kind of story is not your thing.

Personally I think the pacing is fine but the flow of story needs adjustment.

That's overstatement. I like author style but the flow of the story seems lacking foundation.

lol. You can tell that from this first chapter.

Definitely a forced start. I think the story can be convincing if they put the protagonist in because they can use him as errand boy.

that's kind of hyperbole I think and manchild might be better suited than most annoying.

Yeah, this looked immature for the character but let's enjoy the guilty pleasure of it.

depressed boy's cry I guess.

Did you mean the previous paragraph? I think it could be solved by changing "man" to "person"