Again great chapter. Just one thing, that the other parents seemed a bit too submissive. They could have argued that it was Orpal who had basically entangled their children in this and their could have been a bit back and forth on this topic, rather than just complete submission and acceptance.

Very great so far! I just have one tiny thing to say. Since you have already progressed the story very far at the time of my comment, but nevertheless less the only thing I found a bit off was how fast and large his mana capacity grew. It is kind of off putting because of the OP mc characteristic, especially in this story, where you have tried to make things as realistic as possible. It would have been a bit nice for him to be average or a bit above in terms of skill and usually just using his brain rather than trucking his way through obstacles. Thats all. [img=recommend]