ReadingDevil
I constanly read, mainly because I'm an introvert and can't hold or start a conversation to save my life.
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Author your work is amazing! The writing quality is almost perfect, even as an English major I've found only a few mistakes. I love that you gave Yang Chan a low status background. I like the dynamic between Yang Chan and Amon, I feel like everyone tends to overdo the system, so I find this very refreshing. This is defiantly a hidden gem, and I hope it gets more attention.
Little Devil Here! Author this is a great story so far, was a bit worried about the smut tag going in, as some authors just skip over the plot itself. Glad your giving time for the story to develop! I would personally like an auxiliary chapter, to go further in depth with the power levels of your novel.
Tomé nota, estoy usando el traductor de Google, así que perdone cualquier error. Esto cambiará en capítulos posteriores, ya que hay reproches aún desconocidos por el personaje principal para retroceder. En cuanto a la comedia... bueno, cada uno por su cuenta, supongo, este pequeño diablo pensó que era divertido.
Little Devil here! Thanks, and actually he is meant to be a bit conflicting. However that will be solved in the later chapters. A new auxiliary chapter is in the works. Important info regaurding one's self ego, Dao heart, and Heart Devils will be included. I cannot give away anymore without spoilers. Hoped this helped!
Little Devil Here! I'm an English major, and I can appreciate the suspense you've managed to work into your novel. I'm not a real fan of mystery/supernatural. However, even 11 chapters I can tell its on the higher end of the spectrum of quality. I'm going to keep reading, and I'm hoping for a bit more background information.
Fate can't really take direct action. Fate will basically arrange a small domino effects to tilt situations around him to be unfavorable for our MC. So, things that look like coincidence and happenstance might be Fatee's doing. The higher your fate value the better your odds that the balence tips in your favor. We will get into more about Fate and Chais once Gu Erin's new Tutor arrives. Hope this Little Devil helped!
Correct, this Little Devil does not like action without motivate. However action and inaction might be a bit more complicated.
Little Devil here, just clarifying, Lucy is quite literally, crazy. Anyone with experience with mentally unstable people, will know to fear them and keep their distance. I hope this answer helps. if you have any more detailed qiestions, this Little Devil's discord is open!
MC isn't bound by Fate, however him having no fate will have an effect later on, no spoilers. His bsd lick is just his interpretation, because Literal Fate is trying to arrange his death. I hope this Little Devils explanation helps!
Sorry mate, this little devil likes conflict... plus remember our MC basically has Zero luck/Fate. If you wish to discuss furthur feel free to join this Little Devil's discord.
Mostly interest, however we'll get into individual veiws in later chapters. Some will help him, some will want to kill him.
Gu Erin was still a mortal at the time, something you'll learn later on. Mortals die pretty easily.
This little Devil will clerify, no imcest. I may be a devi, but I want a clear distinction on how his sister thinks of him before the change. One of the later chaters will take her perspective, and really drive home how regression has changed Gu Erin in the eyes of his family.