the author done a very good job with football details and stuff. but, he seems to forget that the mc is actually a person but not Robot. common man, his girlfriend has Miscarriage but mc seems not even remember about it the next day, and he goes to play game. the guy got second life after dying alone, but only thinks about football and nothing else, I mean I know it a sport novel, but common, at least let him live some good moments of life other than training and stuff. overall it's Hard for me to pick after authors recent hitus, author should improve on charectar designing and building, because there is no way a person who died and came back to life will behave like the mc you're currently writing.

too tragic

the changed Cove is good

thanks

that's good to knowwwwww

need more information about her

marry their own swords

that was a well written fight scene there super

This was such a good story in the early chapters, and the large harem just ruined everything for me. it feels like author made this Harem to make this novel special but he ultimately failed. and the excuse of vahn not being able to learn what is love and like is just simply stupid. I mean it might work for the first world but why the hell did take all other girls even after he experienced what is love is. the novel just failed to develop an interesting and unique love stories, because you will know probably every girl vahn meets will end up with him .despite bring a free novel, i just got really tired of this repeatative romance were the character I read this chapter will simply br forgotten in just a few chapters, so i am dropping it

you can write the novel slowly, but do take care of health.

As someone who uses social media I know what is bisexuality is. the reason I said gender bender is - even if you say she is a female, her character and memories are from a male, her actions in the early chapter indicated that. and your explanations about her past life also did. and that was not a stupid reason to drop the novel. people who read after seeing yuri tag won't always just accept it. the main lead's character was very important to readers to continue reading which was also same in my case. if you think I am the only one like thinks like that, here is a comment from 3 years ago that you liked.

I read upto like more than half of the free chapters, but I just couldn't read and dropping it, the reason being, since I don't mind spoilers i went to this novel's fandom page and yeah i discovered this is not yuri but a gender bender, the female lead has like 2 dude's in her harem. just really not my cup of tea. but realy have to appreciate author's creations, I tried to write a single novel and i couldn't do it properly, writing a original novel of 1900 chapter that was some hard work. did the fans get bored you made this novel gender bender? anyway good novel for those who like it

Read all the chapters, and I have to say, this novel has soo much potential. I seen too many fantasy female lead novels, author Always tend make female lead strong from the start to just write a slice of life novel, but this seemed a different from the story that was explained until now, although the magic aspects of this novel were not too special, they did impress 👍. however, I have questions for authors. how many Harem member does female lead will have in the future? I won't say I don't like Harem, but too many members just makes novel too much complicated for me. overall really a great read if you're looking for a fantasy female lead novel with good decision making skills.

practically a po*n novel. of course I don't have any problems with that. but just how long is this going last. j mean at some point author will ran out of imagination to write the po*n sences and that is exactly what happened in the later chapter. Bro just copy pasted the whole paragraph. but again it will in popular for a while as long as people are hor*y. just not something I would spend my money on

new read

i am at chapter 300 and i am dropping it. reasons and review : firth thing, the novels beginning is absolutely good and I loved it, but as the story progresses it really becomes bad and I feel like some princess delusional is writing this. i mean there so many stupid things are happening and they are happening repeatedly. and the love story starting is so one-sided that i wanted stop it way long ago. i mean why is male is the only one always running after her. while this girl do a lot of things a normal boyfriend will get but the male lead is like "yeah it's okay". are you kidding why is this girl go to a date when she already confirmed her relationship with the male lead. yeah, yeah, i know that she didn't know about the date until she went there, but what happened after going there she could've just said that i already love someone. i mean just imagine shufen(male lead) going on a let's say a fake date with girl, i don't think Lin xue's reaction will be the same as the male lead. and above of this this girl has never really shown any care towards the male lead until where I read I don't about the future. i mean he has to worry about her everytime but she was like "mey he will be okay after he is mr. belzabub" and from that point the story just keeps dragged like a gum bro and bye