Yes, I merged some chapters and rewrote some parts of it.

Well, actually, it was a blessing in disguise. When I changed platforms, I gained more readers in a month than here in three months, so everything worked out in the end, I guess :)

That's not entirely true. For my re-release, I did some heavy editing, fixing many errors, merging some chapters, and rewriting some parts of the story so the chapter numbers and names aren't the same as here. On my Patreon, I will start releasing new chapters within 2–3 weeks for my members. For the public release, it will take 4-5 weeks before the story catches up.

Sorry, I can't give you any names or links as it is against the rules here, but you can google the name of my novel and it will pop up :)

Sorry, I can't give you any names or links as it is against the rules here, but you can google the name of my novel and it will pop up :)

Quick update: the new chapter might come out a day later as I didn't have the time to edit it properly.

Sorry, I forgot to mention it - it will be around the same time as the last chapter, Sunday, around 1 pm GMT.

Well, at the start, Darian proceeded extra cautiously as he was new to everything. But after several years of living in the city, he now knows who he can and cannot afford to offend.

Thank you for your input. Yeah, I didn't think about that. But I'm sure Darian brought something. Just because I don't write it doesn't mean it couldn't happen :)

Thank you again for your generous support it means a lot to me. I'm still waiting to see if my book gets contracted on WN before I start exploring other options of publishing my book :)

Hi, thanks for your input. I'm glad you are enjoying my book. I don't have a patreon but you can check ko-fi.com/cosmicquill where I add illustrations and later more behind-the scenes content for my supporters :)

Well, in this chapter I wanted to showcase the end of Darian's transformation from a poor villager into a rich citydweller and clothes are a big part of showcasing people's wealth and status. Don't worry there will be more action in future chapters :)

It certainly did not, maybe try to reload your browser or look into chapter list... there you can find the latest chapter:)

Well, I already applied for a contract about a month ago but still didn't get a response. So for now it will remain free.

Well, I already applied for a contract about a month ago but still didn't get a response. So for now it will remain free.

Well, it's the good old principle of "Show, not tell..." Ideally, you should write the dialogue in a way that the identity of the speaker comes naturally from the context of the sentence, and in that case, you don't have to write any "he said" to it. But that of course requires a lot of practice so for now, keep it in mind and try to avoid it where you can.

This is a great story! Well-written and descriptive it captures your imagination. My only criticism is that the paragraphs could be shorter with more spacing to make them easier to read.

Good story, the plot is interesting and the characters are well developed. Still, I want to give you a few tips from a fellow author that can imho improve your writing... Try to drop the "he said," and "she said" in every dialogue line it's kind of distracting. Another thing is you should focus less on every mundane thing that Max does - remember you are writing a novel, not a journal. So focus primarily on things important for the plotline. But overall I think it has potential so keep writing!

I kinda like Cheryl she has a very interesting character. Overall the story is great, the flow is nice, no lengthy explanations at the start - the readers are thrown into the action right away. Good job author keep writing!

I just wanted to lay out that he won't kill without a solid reason.