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Ego_Epicenter1yrReplied to DonMegaloYou're correct, God Speed Impulse is quite overpowered. I did consider it, but I wanted my character to have abilities from Kuroko No Basket. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
The young man opened his eyes and looked at the being with a sense of purpose. "I want Kise's Perfect Copy, Seijuurou Akashi's Emperor Eye & Momoi's Analyst/Intel from Kuroko No Basket."- Ego_Epicenter1yrReplied to Drakion
Thanks for bringing it to my attention. After watching Naruto, it seems some of its influence rubbed off on my writing. I appreciate you catching that. ^^
"Welcome to the club," Reo greeted him with a smile. "I'm Mizukage Reo and this is Seishiro Nagi." - Ego_Epicenter1yrReplied to Sovannra_Seang
No, Reo made that decision two months ago, and at the moment he was just reminiscing about that moment aloud. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
"I have been hearing rumors that you have been talking about wanting to become a professional football player," he continues, "I understand that you may be feeling bored with your life here and may want something more, but I cannot allow you to waste your time and potential on something as frivolous as football." - Ego_Epicenter1yrReplied to AyeSha
There's nothing to be sorry about! What you say is true. Thank you for your feedback. I'll fix it at some point and strive to use less the word in the future. :p Thank you for your feedback, yet again. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
As Reo and Nagi walked through the school halls, Reo's voice was filled with determination and excitement as he spoke to Nagi about his plans for the school's football team. "We need to find some new talent for the team, Nagi. We have to win the nationals," Reo said, his eyes scanning the crowds of students for potential players. - Ego_Epicenter1yrReplied to King_KayCh 6 Chapter 6
- Ego_Epicenter1yrReplied to Qavid
I am glad you are open to giving feedback. As an author, it is always helpful to hear what can be improved or what struck a chord with someone. I look forward to hearing more about your thoughts on the chapters when their stack up. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Ch 6 Chapter 6 - Ego_Epicenter1yrReplied to Willamis_MatheusCh 6 Chapter 6
- Ego_Epicenter1yrReplied to AZ_TACh 6 Chapter 6
- Ego_Epicenter1yrReplied to RosignolCh 1 Chapter 3: The Ultimate Test - Introducing Blue Lock Facility