yep and then he can shape his shadow into the shape of other after all he is the master of watching and learning.

congratulations

ummmm ....I think we will soon find out...

I wondered why he didn't before he left but...he has still needed it.

yep and extra protection when using the water memories he has acquired

hahaha darn it ...have to read the gate opening battle and the aftermath bit by bit....

yes love the story but the piece meal reading is enough to make me put it down.

they need heads to hang ...doesnt need to be their own.

good story could be promising even but lost to poor planning and editing....swamp of words repeating themselves and completely bare bones in other places and words that dont mean what the writer thinks they do.... sad cos as I said it has promise

story has a lot of promise. but needs strong editing....some words do not fit and may not represent the writers meaning and I think the translation may need looking at as while it is not bad but has slipped in places and it breaks the flow of the readers visualization of what they are reading. The names given to characters also need rethinking... some are ok but a couple are aweful. An inconsistency in the beginning is when the narrator finds Val and describes her amazement at this weird thing in front of her ...but she knows its name is 'Val'.... ? either she knows Val and is describing it for the new reader - in which case she would describe it differently or its new and why does she know its name is Val....?

Good initial concept but it was let down by many unnecessary words around the housing for orphanages (to bulk up chapters?) sad... it would have been better while introducing the older man to refer to him by name once or twice to give the impression of friendship between them as well as what has been written The dialogue during the shared food was clunky and needs rewriting.... either its a flashback of when shared food was first offered and that needs to be indicated or given that he has been working there it wouldn't be talked bout as it it was the first time....

interesting concept....writing has a good flow and names used are not super weird like many other stories. As mentioned by someone else Storm Wind would probably have numbers with it unless of course that turns out to be a plot twist....? On the whole its a good start to hopefully a very readable book.

interesting twist