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    The story had a great potential(atleast top ten) with no system and extra perks but i dropped it after reading 80 chapters. Writing quality: Decent MC: Not likable.Narcissist. it likes he is jealous of Harry and always judges other characters and world building negatively(most of the time). Story progression : Even for a "slice of life" story it is very slow and boring. Dialogues: Too cringe.

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    Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)
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